Chezzy-Am [2013-07-04 09:03:59 +0000 UTC]
#PoeticalCondition critique
I'm going to run on the assumption that "Aminals" is a deliberate misspelling. Furthermore, given the overall presentation of this poem, I took notice of the approach and the content concerned. This poem's innocence, sweet and good natured poetic discourse, and even the know-it-all ending (like a child who's been fully satisfied with life) makes it a work which can make you smile. This is an innocent work, and hence it gives credence to the "Aminal" title. It certainly feels to me that you were intending for an innocent portrayal.
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babino75 [2013-05-05 12:40:41 +0000 UTC]
That's neat. But don't be upset if some of the people on Deviant don't care, or flat out tell you they don't. Some people are so rude. God bless!
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