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Mewitti — Alterity pg. 16

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In which personal problems spill over into into a battle. If it wasn't already apparent, this run is going to explore some really unhappy situations. I'm sorry, guys.

For some insight into why I handled Lassie's story the way I did, click the 'Story Notes' tag on this post .

Thanks to ~Sinnfinity for spicing up the dialogue, doing the flats, and giving me hugs at certain parts of this page.

Current team:
Robin the human
Talon/Dante the Torchic
Dante the Cascoon
Lassie the Poochyena
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Comments: 351

Stalkiwi [2019-11-20 13:32:56 +0000 UTC]

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Mewitti In reply to Stalkiwi [2019-11-20 18:24:44 +0000 UTC]

I'm sorry :') I was devastated too

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thatguybrody [2019-11-13 06:18:59 +0000 UTC]

so close

     and yet

         so far away

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Imgonnah8myselfforti [2019-11-07 16:04:36 +0000 UTC]

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WeirdSmiles [2019-03-22 03:10:45 +0000 UTC]

HE WAS JUST A KID. NO! that girl not giving up the fight killed him.


RIP  LASSIE.

may you run free in heaven.

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Scarecrow113 [2018-06-15 22:54:07 +0000 UTC]

NOT THE PUPPY

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SubtleSledge [2018-03-26 08:18:32 +0000 UTC]

I knew it

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Carameja [2018-03-12 22:26:39 +0000 UTC]

..this just crushed my spirits.. TT^TT

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SonicbolttheLatios [2018-03-02 21:05:22 +0000 UTC]

Re-reading this nuzlocke I knew what was going to happen but that ending still hit me so hard...

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Cherry-Spot [2018-02-05 00:07:36 +0000 UTC]

Noooooo not Lassy ;-;

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Tjman461 [2018-02-04 22:52:02 +0000 UTC]

Nooooooo! I literally just said in the last page that I didn’t want Lassie to die soon!

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Mewitti In reply to Tjman461 [2018-02-04 23:46:57 +0000 UTC]

I'm so sorry :'D

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Tjman461 In reply to Mewitti [2018-02-05 15:18:14 +0000 UTC]

Wait was Lassie a boy or a girl?

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Mewitti In reply to Tjman461 [2018-02-05 19:00:46 +0000 UTC]

Lassie was a boy. His original owner might have just liked the name, or just assumed Lassie was a girl and only realized his mistake after the name stuck.

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TheOfficiaGameDragon [2017-12-15 09:26:40 +0000 UTC]

That's dumb! Nuzlockes are dumb!
...
I'm sorry for being rude just there. This story is cool, you're cool, you draw pretty pictures, and Nuzlockes make for some fun stories and let's plays...
but... LASSIE!!!
You're too good at comics bro!    

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VampireSessh [2017-11-26 11:10:08 +0000 UTC]

My heart...

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Ashen-Phoenix [2017-10-19 03:37:10 +0000 UTC]

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Mewitti In reply to Ashen-Phoenix [2017-10-19 03:45:36 +0000 UTC]

"Lassie is too pure for this world."

YOU DID THIS

Seriously though, thank you for your thoughtful comments on the comic, means a lot that you took the time!

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Ashen-Phoenix In reply to Mewitti [2017-10-20 02:49:03 +0000 UTC]

I did and I'm SORRY! Oh when will I learn to use my powers for good and not for evil!

lol Anyway, you're most welcome. I'm loving your comic and it's evident how hard you're working on every entry. The panel flow and "camera" choices are fantastic.

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Doukz [2017-09-10 23:36:16 +0000 UTC]

It's always my favorite poke'mon haha aaa  

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WhiteNekosFox [2017-06-02 23:15:05 +0000 UTC]

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iamloss3 [2016-07-05 06:43:55 +0000 UTC]

Ya I kinda saw it coming. too pure for this world

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InOceansDeep [2016-05-03 01:00:22 +0000 UTC]

Nononononononononono this can't be happening. Not Lassie. PLease not Lassie.

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Mewitti In reply to InOceansDeep [2016-05-03 01:22:29 +0000 UTC]

I'm sorry :'D

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InOceansDeep In reply to Mewitti [2016-05-03 01:35:46 +0000 UTC]

It happens in nuzlockes... I've done enough nuzlockes to know.

I really love your comic BTW. I'm hooked!

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Mewitti In reply to InOceansDeep [2016-05-03 01:59:05 +0000 UTC]

Really glad you like it! I'm working on a new page right now, actually... maybe it will be done by the time you are caught up!

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InOceansDeep In reply to Mewitti [2016-05-03 02:16:04 +0000 UTC]

Awesome!!! Can't wait too read it!!!

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FearfulTrickster [2015-12-17 02:24:21 +0000 UTC]

Lassie ;__;

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Yakalentos [2015-11-06 17:38:45 +0000 UTC]

Oh man! The feelings!
Just... the feelings!

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DragonetXime [2015-07-19 11:31:09 +0000 UTC]

I just knew he was gonna die last page, just fucking knew it... 

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lonelynightrain [2015-07-18 21:06:44 +0000 UTC]

Awwww.

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hero1211 [2015-05-18 03:20:19 +0000 UTC]

he never even get to see his trainer

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eklinger [2015-04-26 02:42:42 +0000 UTC]

....im not gonna cry...not gonna cry...;-;

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JustSewaddlingAway [2015-04-02 19:13:04 +0000 UTC]

Lassie...? I was just kidding

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Mewitti In reply to JustSewaddlingAway [2015-04-02 20:04:00 +0000 UTC]

I always get really, really sad when people post "Gosh I hope Lassie doesn't die" comments on page 15 :'D

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JustSewaddlingAway In reply to Mewitti [2015-04-02 22:31:00 +0000 UTC]

well that's what you get for making us all sad

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SeriesArtiststarter [2015-03-24 02:03:56 +0000 UTC]

I hate to ask but what precise Bite move was it that caused all the trouble for Lassie and her Trainer? If this were based of ORAS I could understand if it was Fire Fang or Thunder Fang but Bite seems a little jumping the gun to be called illegal.

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Mewitti In reply to SeriesArtiststarter [2015-03-25 03:18:42 +0000 UTC]

Hi; it was just the basic Bite attack. In this world there are pretty strict League restrictions on movesets in order to try and keep battles more safe and balanced. When dealing with extremely low-level Pokemon, many of whom are children (like Lassie), the League considers it inappropriate for Poochyena to use that move because they can easily break bones and/or kill other Pokemon with it.

To give an example, American Bulldogs--one of the hardest-biting dogs--have a bite force of 300 pounds per square inch. You only have to look on the news to see what that kind of force can do to flesh and bone. By contrast, hyenas, which Poochyena are modeled after, can have a bite force of 1,100 PSI. They bite harder than both lions and tigers. Looking at it this way, I feel like letting them use this move at level 13 (lowered to level 10 in recent gens) seems frighteningly generous!

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SeriesArtiststarter In reply to Mewitti [2015-03-25 20:47:55 +0000 UTC]

Heyo! Huh, guess then it just startled some Pokémon and then.....BOOM. I bet that is quite the case in some instances, though I get the feeling the likes of Drake would be out for Blood with those Dragons. I can see what you mean by that though if it were following from the ORAS point of view it would be clear they would frown upon Elemental Fangs as well, the power those have in the paws of such a Pokémon is frightening to some.

Oh big time-the power they have is unreal, especially when you look at some of the larger specimens that have bigger jaws. Wait-your telling me Poochyena and Mightyena are modelled after those mangy poachers, those unconfirmed cat-dog laughing abominations at the very bottom of being completely wild? I take it that is impressive level of strength then? O_O You are joking( I believe), those creatures have stronger biting power then Lions and Tigers and probably Ligers too? Well it is a scary thought to say the least but hey.....at least it wasn't Crunch am I right? Now that.....would have been devastating.

Keep up the good work~! This is a thoroughly good Nuzlocke!

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SuperCL [2015-02-26 14:52:07 +0000 UTC]

That was so sad... I really didn't see that coming. Great story telling, and as always great art!
keep up the great work

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loyal424 [2015-02-06 07:56:09 +0000 UTC]

Holy crap this comic is amazing.. You do drama so well Q_Q also im really not the type to get sad over a nuzlocke death, but damn. This got to me real hard.

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Queen-Dreamy [2014-11-10 18:53:35 +0000 UTC]

I cried. Not lying. I really liked Lassie.

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Shadowonwater In reply to Queen-Dreamy [2015-01-12 04:53:50 +0000 UTC]

me to poor Lassie.......I...I thought that he would get to his rightful trainer.........bt I was wrong.

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SakuraNights [2014-10-01 18:11:27 +0000 UTC]

I'm not gonna lie, that was probably one of the most dramatic and intense moments in a nuzlocke I've ever seen... amazing job...!! And on a side note, *ahem* ....

LASSIE, NOOOO!!!!!

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MamaWicked [2014-09-19 12:43:04 +0000 UTC]

*sobs*

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HopeOfRiuton [2014-09-11 12:24:42 +0000 UTC]

That's three Pokemon you killed off! You proud of yourself?!

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Defaigravity In reply to HopeOfRiuton [2014-09-13 19:08:37 +0000 UTC]

please tag your spoilers, i've already read this run up to the point its at
but for people who havent please tag your spoilers

also, it is a nuzlocke, she doesnt mean to kill off these guys, it just happens, sadly.

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TheAntsaBoy94 In reply to Defaigravity [2014-10-01 17:26:05 +0000 UTC]

Funny, it's actually you who's giving out spoilers here. Remember those two Zizagoons?

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Defaigravity In reply to TheAntsaBoy94 [2014-10-01 22:41:48 +0000 UTC]

im not really giving out that many spoilers, im under her orginal comment you know

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TheAntsaBoy94 In reply to Defaigravity [2014-10-02 06:47:02 +0000 UTC]

She simply stated, that three Pokemons have been killed. This is true; Poochyena and two Zizagoons before him. So, if you thought that was a spoiler, you have clearly forgotten about those Zizagoons and counted Poochyena as the first one to die, hence revealing, that two more is going to die. Afterall, you'd know if it's true "i already read this run up to points it at" yet, you didn't try to correct her.

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