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MercurioBebop β Thieves 07
Published: 2009-02-19 12:44:09 +0000 UTC; Views: 2348; Favourites: 23; Downloads: 0
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Laaaaast page! The last panel was very fun to colour, the problem was the perspective. Re-done too many times to like the lineart.If you see any gramatical errors, please, note me or leave a comment. English is an evil language to write in.
Golden Sun Β© Camelot
Plot - ~hypermagneto999
Drawing - ~Mercurio2539
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EDIT: Thank you so much for your support! I feel really happy with all those kind comments and crits
EDIT2: Changed the text in the fifth panel. Now the thief does't speak retard.
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Comments: 19
Uaaah, que genial este comic! *
(Yo vi solo un error gramatical, es que en el ultimo panel de pagina 6, "tienes razon" se dice mejor "you're right" en ingles.)
Y lo siento por mi espaΓ±ol terrible, no lo he practicado mucho ultimamente
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Muchas gracias!!
No creas, este se puede mejorar mucho. Lo hice hace un montΓ³n y ahora lo veo lleno de errores.
Y sΓ, you're right XD Pero realmente ya no merece la pena corregirlo... Gracias de todos modos!
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Well, the comic was good. The only criticism I have is the style. You have a wonderful style, don't get me wrong, it's just it doesn't have the right feel for the Golden Sun series. But nice job otherwise. ^_^
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Yeah, I'm afraid you have reason. I haven't reached a definitive style in anything, and in comic pages it's much more evident. And in something like GS, amateur manga it's not the best...XD
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Ehhh,well, it's cool that you did make this comic. It was really good! Don't worry: you'll develop a definitive style eventaully! ^_^
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I've read through your manga, and its awesome!! You are very good at drawing manga 
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Thanks! Very nice of you.
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wow this was really good.
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There is no more story to change, it's a pretty short part. But ask someone who has never played the game, sure he/she'll have very good suggestions.
Thank you so much for faving it!
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Awesome
if it would'nt been for the Publicity from i would miss this fantastic GS manga
i really like it, hope to see more 
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Awesome... the coloring is really cool!
The only grammatical error I see is in the sixth panel , or the part when he says, "We are not going to return the stolen stuff; and you are nobodies to stop us!" I think it would sound better if you rephrased the last part as something like, "You guys will not stop us," or "You cannot stop us." Anything else similar to that is okay, too. Or, if you're looking to say that 'they' are nothing and are unable to stop them, then you could use, "Nothing you can do will stop us."
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That phrase actually sounded pretty weird to me, I'll edit it as soon as possible.
Thank you so much!
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You're welcome!
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Golden Sun!!!!! OoO
Hacia un montonazo que no veia algo de estos!!!
uale uale ualeee
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Pues creo que tienen intenciΓ³n de sacar la tercera parte para la DS, asΓ que toca ir re-jugando los anteriores!
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XDDD pues ube muy mala suerte con el 2... nunca lo acabΓ© el marrrdito!! DX
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