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Description This one was super fun to draw all the swirls, and I'm really happy with how it came out.

Word order as follows:
We learn, as a child, to feel
the wind,
And exist in consciousness,
remembering our lost moments.

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Taken from The Seven Whispers by Christina Baldwin.
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Comments: 425

impossible-fox [2014-10-06 23:29:27 +0000 UTC]

Beautiful.

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ghostcrab311 [2014-04-05 18:56:14 +0000 UTC]

fantastic - beautiful poem, beautiful image!

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mel-face In reply to ghostcrab311 [2014-04-17 03:08:21 +0000 UTC]

Thank you!

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ilyilaice [2013-11-28 11:44:10 +0000 UTC]

it was a little difficult to read at first (i especially didn't see the phrase 'the wind,') but reading the whole poem in your artist's comment cleared it up for me. a very simple but pretty poem! there's so much truth in that. and the swirls are lovely too. i love how it echoes the image of the wind in the poem.

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mel-face In reply to ilyilaice [2013-12-08 00:31:12 +0000 UTC]

Thank you so much, this means a lot! 

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KyaniteArcher [2013-11-26 10:56:35 +0000 UTC]

Awesome, I love this!

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mel-face In reply to KyaniteArcher [2013-12-08 00:28:21 +0000 UTC]

Thank you!

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CWeebs [2013-11-26 08:18:16 +0000 UTC]

Book reports must have been terribly difficult for you.

That said, this is a fantastically creative way to make poetry. I look forward to seeing what else you come up with in your literary defacing endeavors.  Great job.

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mel-face In reply to CWeebs [2013-12-08 00:30:43 +0000 UTC]

Haha, thank you! I haven't done any more of this in ages, but maybe I'll do another over winter break. :)

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DailyLitDeviations [2013-11-26 05:55:08 +0000 UTC]

Your wonderful literary work has been chosen to be featured by =DailyLitDeviations in a news article that can be found here: dailylitdeviations.deviantart.… Congratulations on your DD!

Be sure to check out the other artists featured and show your support by ing the News Article. Keep writing and keep creating.

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mel-face In reply to DailyLitDeviations [2013-12-08 00:29:30 +0000 UTC]

Thanks so much! 

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DreamTheBunny [2013-09-22 02:21:22 +0000 UTC]

Looks beautiful~! Lovely job~!

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mel-face In reply to DreamTheBunny [2013-10-02 04:41:07 +0000 UTC]

Thank you!

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DreamTheBunny In reply to mel-face [2013-10-04 00:56:18 +0000 UTC]

You're welcome~! ^^

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jameth15 [2013-01-24 01:24:15 +0000 UTC]

Wicked cool!

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mel-face In reply to jameth15 [2013-01-24 20:57:27 +0000 UTC]

Thank you!

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HoneyBadger12 [2012-12-06 01:26:56 +0000 UTC]

This is beautiful

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mel-face In reply to HoneyBadger12 [2012-12-07 01:20:12 +0000 UTC]

Thank you!

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ArethusaVespera [2012-11-03 01:23:21 +0000 UTC]

Woah. This is really beautiful!

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mel-face In reply to ArethusaVespera [2012-11-03 05:12:28 +0000 UTC]

Thank you so much! <3

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ArethusaVespera In reply to mel-face [2012-11-03 14:47:59 +0000 UTC]

You're welcome!

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fictionalnostalgia [2012-07-18 02:44:35 +0000 UTC]

wow.

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mel-face In reply to fictionalnostalgia [2012-07-18 03:40:33 +0000 UTC]

C:

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Rho-Dee-Oh [2012-07-07 14:31:35 +0000 UTC]

This is a very creative and poetic altered book.

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mel-face In reply to Rho-Dee-Oh [2012-07-09 06:50:45 +0000 UTC]

Thank you so much!

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Tyranous-King [2012-07-02 07:54:01 +0000 UTC]

wow amazing

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mel-face In reply to Tyranous-King [2012-07-09 06:50:24 +0000 UTC]

Thanks!

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Tyranous-King In reply to mel-face [2012-07-11 08:26:39 +0000 UTC]

welcome

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PossumFan [2012-07-02 04:03:14 +0000 UTC]

I love poetry like this, absolutely adore it! Yours is no exception, great work!

+ fave

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mel-face In reply to PossumFan [2012-07-09 06:50:15 +0000 UTC]

Thank you so much, that means a lot!

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PossumFan In reply to mel-face [2012-07-10 02:12:12 +0000 UTC]

You're most welcome.

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MoonTheGreat [2012-06-22 00:39:35 +0000 UTC]

did you do it directly on the paper, or is it digital?

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mel-face In reply to MoonTheGreat [2012-06-22 19:04:54 +0000 UTC]

All of them (except the one in the nature book) are drawn directly in the book with india ink pens. C:

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MoonTheGreat In reply to mel-face [2012-06-22 21:29:19 +0000 UTC]

do you doodle first with a pencil or do you just draw with the pen?

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mel-face In reply to MoonTheGreat [2012-06-23 16:11:49 +0000 UTC]

I always plan out at least the poem itself with a pencil. In this one, once I had the poem outlined, I kind of went to town with my pens, planning in my head, only. However, my other piece, Pace, took a LOT more planning and sketching because I wanted the hands to look realistic.
So, it pretty much depends on what I'm drawing.
Are you planning on giving found poetry a shot?

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MoonTheGreat In reply to mel-face [2012-06-23 16:45:53 +0000 UTC]

ah ok

its interesting but I don't think i could do it

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mel-face In reply to MoonTheGreat [2012-06-23 16:51:33 +0000 UTC]

I wouldn't discount your abilities, found poetry is actually a LOT easier than it looks!

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MoonTheGreat In reply to mel-face [2012-06-23 17:22:48 +0000 UTC]

i'll think about it maybe I'll try some in the future

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happyhorseshoe303 [2012-06-20 15:10:10 +0000 UTC]

omygodsocool!!!!!

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mel-face In reply to happyhorseshoe303 [2012-06-21 23:35:07 +0000 UTC]

Thanks!! :D

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happyhorseshoe303 In reply to mel-face [2012-07-15 01:47:28 +0000 UTC]

and i love your icon, too. so pretty!

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mel-face In reply to happyhorseshoe303 [2012-07-16 03:24:27 +0000 UTC]

Ah, thanks! I love this icon, I use it for pretty much every site I'm on.

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happyhorseshoe303 In reply to mel-face [2012-07-16 23:48:13 +0000 UTC]

it's awesome.

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ToBeNude [2012-06-20 05:40:08 +0000 UTC]

I'm happy with it too. Perhaps I should say delighted!

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mel-face In reply to ToBeNude [2012-06-21 23:34:44 +0000 UTC]

Oh ho ho, that's wonderful to hear!

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Peris-Productions [2012-06-18 19:22:59 +0000 UTC]

Looks like I got competition! Congrats on the DD

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mel-face In reply to Peris-Productions [2012-06-20 00:07:05 +0000 UTC]

Haha, thank you!

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JazzXrawr [2012-06-17 05:29:52 +0000 UTC]

aWESOME!!

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mel-face In reply to JazzXrawr [2012-06-17 20:48:16 +0000 UTC]

Thanks!

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PursuingTheCerberus [2012-06-14 22:31:30 +0000 UTC]

AMAZING!!! I just got into found poetry....this is lovely in both the words and the art

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