HOME | DD
mea-culpa — Dine
Published: 2008-08-30 16:09:50 +0000 UTC; Views: 554; Favourites: 2; Downloads: 3
Redirect to original
Description
‘How sad’ they say: to dine alone,As solo as the single rose,
That stands in defiant, stubborn stance,
As waiters weave and spin and dance.
Related content
Comments: 2
I don't know if this really needs to be longer. They say everything can be shortened, even Moby Dick. And I think it works well short, since the feeling comes out without being preachy. Third line sounds like it needs to drop a syllable though.
👍: 0 ⏩: 0