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mcgregaw — rising dead again

Published: 2012-12-02 21:45:44 +0000 UTC; Views: 114; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 5
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Description thought i'd do a little more tinkering, not sure if for the better though
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CHOCOCHIYOKO [2012-12-03 18:42:39 +0000 UTC]

It's honestly a bit hard to see what is going on in this piece. I would ry to make it a bit more clear with just a few harder lines. A little more color would be nice (like using a cooler color as shadow for example) Also it looks like the skeleton is climbing over something so it would be nice to show what this is. It would be nice to see some of the torso (like the ribs would be awesome to see, to complete the skeleton a bit.

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mcgregaw In reply to CHOCOCHIYOKO [2012-12-03 21:50:16 +0000 UTC]

thanks, really constructive now just need to find time to finish it

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