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corazoncult [2016-12-31 10:42:15 +0000 UTC]

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At first glance, all that I really wanted to say was "The colors look great." Of course, that isn't all after a moment of just looking at it.

First off I want to point out the few crucial things that I personally believe could be worked on. Starting with the shading towards the character. I can see that you tried to add in light and darkness where needed however I personally believe that in some areas the shading could be less harsh and in other areas more shading could be added. For example, where the light is pointed: I think that the shading should be lighter rather than harsher. If you point a light towards something, the shading begins to become less noticeable as light is being pointed towards it. That isn't really applied here as well as it could've been.
Moving onto the shading. The shading here isn't really that bad at all-- I just believe that more shading could've been added. The shading everywhere else is pretty good but in two places it kind of lacks to me. The face and neck area + hair. I feel as if things are a bit too blurred in those areas causing them to lose that sense of shading that the rest of the picture seems to have. To fix this, perhaps you could blur moderately or add harsher shading to make it pop like the rest of the picture?
Another thing that kind of bothers me is the text in the bottom of the picture. It's cut off, making it look less professional than it would've had it been lined correctly. That's one of those small things that can often make the picture seem less appealing.


But onto the good things, I believe that the thing that caught me with this picture is it's colors. The sunset looks absolutely amazing and this perspective with this character and the sunset is amazing. It offers the idea that he's about to walk into the light and just disappear in it.
Not only that, but I enjoy what you did with the lines and triangles. And the paper plane hasn't gone unnoticed either-- simple things like that really gave this piece flare in my eyes.

Overall, fantastic picture. <3

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sirnayme [2017-01-22 23:54:16 +0000 UTC]

This is so cute I miss osomatsu u_u
Congrats on your second year though!! omg!! I hope you continue to have a good time here on dA! ;w; )/

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SaraCupcakesxX [2017-01-01 14:02:43 +0000 UTC]

;;;;;;;;;0;;;;;;;;;;; your art Are So amazing!!
OSO LOOKS SO HANDSOME ;;A;;<3333 *-*

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Kamigarin [2017-01-01 13:44:33 +0000 UTC]

2017 will be better   
2016 will be the year of the past.
..finally ;v;

love your art as always <<3 this year is another year of improvements!!

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Pauly-chan [2016-12-31 11:03:57 +0000 UTC]

GOOD BYE 2016
and hello 2017
happy new year honey

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PoisonedC00kies [2016-12-31 10:32:48 +0000 UTC]

BEAUTIFUL *0* OMAI

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Sumirechii [2016-12-31 10:26:59 +0000 UTC]

OMG THIS IS AMAZING *_*

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