Comments: 23
Wyntry [2012-12-20 19:18:59 +0000 UTC]
Overall
Vision
Originality
Technique
Impact
To start of, not here to bash, but to be constructive.
Lines: Your use of them in this piece brings it the people, setting, and atmosphere into a stunning reality.
Color: The colors fit each other perfectly, a harmony in the dull hues, nothing fighting to come to the front, which I find both awesome and somewhat disturbing.
Repetition in Expression: I find that they all seem kind of complacent where they are, and it makes it seem more surreal, especially with the faces showing more thought than anything.
Balance: Perfect!
Energy: It shows off a lot of hidden energy, that of the water, and the lighting of the castle in the back.
So all in all, I am praising this in this critique.
To give some advice.... (Since I have to...) Make the colors contrast if you want it to be more realistic....that and the expressions, it seems dreamy, otherwise. That's all I got. Amazing work.
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the-Loony [2014-02-10 20:37:42 +0000 UTC]
omg you drew lisa tully? really? how could you go in for that!?
okay, kidding aside.
i just love how you threw the cloth folds and the positioning of your characters. both girls looking away from P. ... it fits, really.
iΒ΄m not so much in love with their faces and necklines (especially the girlsΒ΄) the faces, i think, are a matter of taste. i simply find some of your other heads much more attractive, not only in terms of sexyness but in general. also caΒ΄s not so convincing with such a overwhelmingly soft look. her eyebrows seem to be drawn back just too far. (i think sheΒ΄s been a strong person before being married off to the north.)
on the other hand... ah well, anythings possible and after all itΒ΄s probably especially interesting to see her out of the tough mom mode. also i do understand that it comes with the style you chose for her. the pre raffaelite.
anyhow, what keeps bugging me when i give the picture time to settle, is lisas neck and jawline. it just looks so terribly hard, i feel that the transition from face to neck is missing and iΒ΄m not to sure about katlyns neck meeting the head in a proper angle and at the right place..
however, that are small issues and maybe youΒ΄ve already noticed them. Also itΒ΄s not always good to overanalyze pictures. they can easily loose their hidden beauty that way.
so iΒ΄ll just say this at the end: the overall composition is beautiful, especially the flowing gowns and hair.
i do like this pic a lot and it would be great to see similiar artworks from you in the future!
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the-Loony In reply to the-Loony [2014-02-10 20:38:33 +0000 UTC]
beg pardon for all faulty names... it comes with audio books. guilty.
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gagnorblu [2013-10-26 04:31:56 +0000 UTC]
He used to be such a sweet child. Now he's a sociopathic power-hungry Player.
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dot-dashlee [2013-01-07 04:44:01 +0000 UTC]
so beautiful. it makes me sad to look at this though...
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Claudia-SG [2012-12-28 11:30:42 +0000 UTC]
uuuh bello quetto! *__*
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Regendy [2012-12-28 01:59:04 +0000 UTC]
Aww, I love seeing things of Riverrun kids before the tragedy and dysfunction set in. Like other people have said, the muted colors make for such a lovely tranquil feel.
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Istriel [2012-12-22 11:20:17 +0000 UTC]
I was sure it was a ASOIAF fanart and then I saw the tittle Riverrun (I'm used to read it in french " Vivesaigues") and the description !! XD
This is lovely !
Petyr looks so kiiind and sweet here and I love the way you make grass and water
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cabepfir [2012-12-21 07:18:43 +0000 UTC]
Lo amo tutto e (ripeto) ti odio perchΓ© se avessi uno schermo utilizzabile lo metterei subito come wallpaper e non ce l'ho. Waterhouse sarebbe fiero di te!
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biffyc7 [2012-12-21 00:12:45 +0000 UTC]
Oh man, this is too awesome to describe in words
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vya [2012-12-20 22:04:55 +0000 UTC]
That's wonderful!<3
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theguiltyones [2012-12-20 20:25:45 +0000 UTC]
this is too pretty! love the outfits and your whole imagining of riverrun. it's just gorgeous.
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mariasindellagrayson [2012-12-20 19:24:33 +0000 UTC]
I adore Catelyn...Lysa and Littlefinger can jump out a moon door. Both sisters are pretty and you can tell which one is which. I like how Catelyn is gazing away with a dreamy expression, probably longing for Brandon or Ned, while Petyr looks at Cat with a similar expression.
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martinacecilia In reply to wikigiuli [2012-12-20 19:30:55 +0000 UTC]
(mwahahah! anche io, non ce la posso fare con i personaggi moralmente ambigui, sono i miei preferiti.)
grazie!
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wikigiuli In reply to martinacecilia [2012-12-20 19:34:18 +0000 UTC]
ma prego, fiera compagna del Villain Funclub! XDDDD
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