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LordLollipop [2018-07-14 00:49:43 +0000 UTC]

 That´s a pretty cool piece,i can see you have very good painting skills but you can improve in some points.
 The first thing you should have done is alternate between hard and soft edges a little bit more,it creates more interest and separates the materials.
You should check out some of this videos,they´re pretty good (www.youtube.com/watch?v=i7pj__… ).
Maybe more saturated colors (like you did in the eyes,that was a really nice touch) don´t be afraid of experimenting!
 I like his expression but you could have pushed his face some more,to make the expression even more dynamic (this guy helped me a lot[www.youtube.com/watch?v=F51CVG… ]or if you want a more "anatomical" tutorial you should check this guy videos[www.youtube.com/user/sinixdesi… ) this covers pretty much everything i had to "criticize".
 But got a lot of things right,like the composition,background and specially the hair;omg this hair is awesome;Overall its a cool piece 7,5/10 good work.
 {if there is anything wrong with my spelling or grammar pls note me;i´m not a native speaker but i´m trying my best S2}

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ghoulhive [2018-07-14 00:36:29 +0000 UTC]

wow, you did a really great job on this! i’ll start by saying that the textures on his clothes and his sword are both very well done, i also really like the aesthetic and ancient Japan feel that this picture has. some constructige comments i’d like to add are that maybe some more detail could be added to his hands, and his eyes could be lowered a bit. while i do like the background and the mood it gives off, it also looks a little blurred and could use a bit more detail and brightness. overall, this is a really well done piece!! you are very skilled with realism

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