Comments: 15
FilPaperSoul [2015-04-05 19:45:05 +0000 UTC]
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This is a rather simple piece, so the review won't be too long. Nevertheless, I found this drawing to be nice enough to write one.
I really like this fanart, even if it's just a plain portrait of a character (which can't result in a high originality score). However, adding the staff in the background really makes a difference, adds a certain dynamic to something as still as a portrait... I think it's a nice touch and gives Starlight Glimmer a more menacing appearance. She is just standing there, but looks ready to go and do something... menacing. Like terrorize an entire group of ponies into submission e.deviantart.net/emoticons/b/b… " width="15" height="15" alt="" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="366" title=" (Big Grin)"/>
The anatomy and face expression are perfect, maybe only the outline of the smile could be done with a bit darker color or something - it looks a bit plastered on. Also, I find the glint in her eyes a wee bit to dim for someone looking at me so mischieviously... but that's just my personal taste. Nice job overall, might not look like an evil villain... but definitely looks like a dangerous antagonist!
I really like your technique and style. I love how the brushstrokes are visible, it gives the entire drawing a nice feel, sketchy, yet pleasant vibe. The staff itself could use perhaps a bit more detail, but it acts more of a background, so it doesn't really matter. It's its diagonal positioning that does the job in this piece.
To sum up, very nice piece. Looks like it was fun to draw and it's definitely a sweet drawing to come across while browsing deviantart. Good job e.deviantart.net/emoticons/b/b… " width="15" height="15" alt="" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="366" title=" (Big Grin)"/>
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mapony240 In reply to FilPaperSoul [2015-04-05 19:54:26 +0000 UTC]
Thank you very much for the critique, I always find It very helpfull to hear that things come over like i wanted to or what could be done better next Time. So again thanks And i really think you are Great At giving constructive critisism :3
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ojaio554 [2015-04-07 21:36:28 +0000 UTC]
I hate her
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ojaio554 In reply to mapony240 [2015-04-09 10:33:00 +0000 UTC]
Well, I personally hate her ideas
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mapony240 In reply to ojaio554 [2015-04-09 20:14:33 +0000 UTC]
the ideas are not all that bad, the bad thing is she forces them on people. thats the thing i hate about her.
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Sonic-fan17 [2015-04-06 17:57:32 +0000 UTC]
Awesome!
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NathanButlerArt [2015-04-06 13:44:37 +0000 UTC]
this is really cute!!
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mapony240 In reply to NathanButlerArt [2015-04-06 14:44:11 +0000 UTC]
Not quite the look i was going for but thanks haha XD
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