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How do I girl?o 3 o Yeah I'm not really good at drawing females. But lets see YOUR opinion! Yes YOU!....Larry!
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You make May look better than Nintendo does her.
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just neck... only problem i see. keep up the good work!
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Other commenters got their points. I can't think anything else than that have been already written :3
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Hm... May I give some of my thought on this?
"Looks at text below picture."
I'll take that as a yes.
The good points
1. you got the shading down good.
2. She's really cute.
3. the line art is really neat.
The criticism
1. I think you should make her waist a bit smaller, and her bottom is a bit.... BLOCKY and FLAT.
2. Her chin is a bit too long for a girl.
3. I won't call this a bad point but rather a flaw, and because everyone pointed it out, I think I'll refrain from doing it.
Conclusion, you did great!
PS, how do I answer your question?
"How do I girl?" XD
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The hips could use some work. And the neck.
In a completly unrelated note there should definetly be more ass and boobs.
we need rick to become a man!
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I like her sitting and carrying stuff poses the most c:
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Well, the linework and coloring is good...but her body does look very boyish. The main points that look too boyish are:
1. The face/neck
Her neck is very thick. When drawing, it is usually better to make a girl's neck thinner...also, you might try adding more apparent eyelashes to her eyes to make her appear more feminine.
2. Hips/legs
While not all girls have super wide hips, the hips should be apparent and wider than a male character's. Her legs are perfectly fine as they are, but sometimes it helps to exaggerate the curves just a bit.
I hope this helps you somehow, and keep up the good work 
Seeing all of your cool comics makes me want to try and do a few pages of my comic in a digital format.
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Well then, here is my opinion:
1) Neck is too thick
2) Hips on a woman hardly look like that
3) face is far too masculine
If you would like help on any of these, call me anytime. Or just look up some references.
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I think these poses are a really great improvement!!
I like the ones where she's sitting and the one where she's carrying books.
The only advice I'd give is to work a little bit on the thighs/legs. Also in the one all the way to the right, the arms seem a little to short.
But yeah, really good overall.
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I think it's nice. You can see how much she's improved in terms of style since her first appearance, so I guess that's a good thing. Clap clap clap.
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Alright lets see here..... well the the boobs are excellent Mad. There not too small nor are they ridiculously huge, I applaud you. May's poses aren't to bad and I would have to agree about the neck, slim it down some and your golden.
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I like the way you draw her (better than me if I drew her. ;w; ) The various poses are very lively, and her expressions fit her perfectly, especially the pose where she's blushing and sitting thinking about Rick, maybe? //shot And in the pose with the papers, I kinda expect her to trip over something and spill them all. XD
But... the few pointers I can give is in the neck, the hands, and the thighs and hips. Maybe if you add a little inward curve to where the upper torso and where the hips connect, and flesh them out more. And girls have longer, tapered fingers as well. Females overall, should be soft and curvy.
This said, you're doing a great job with May, Rick, and the Nuzlock in general. I love the art and the story, and I can't wait for more!
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I actually think you draw her better than you draw Rick
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All the cameltoe~ /brick'd
Kidding~ :u
She looks fine...only thing that I can really notice that's a bit iffy...is her neck. Especially the pose to the far left.
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It's nice o3o, but I think her neck is a little to thick, besides that, everything is awesome.
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