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Published: 2015-12-22 05:57:08 +0000 UTC; Views: 155; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 0
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Description This is a painting I made for practice, but It was quite the pain because of all the details ;A;

Characters are my Ocs
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lobotcact [2016-03-20 04:42:22 +0000 UTC]

OC is a nice practice of character design. 

The first three kid's faces or angles are the same, and looks boring and unrealistic. The blue girl's boob's perspective is wrong. Her waist should be pushing against the black bow too. There should be better shading done with the right forearm, because it looks flat and the anatomy is wack. And the book just looks placed in an unaffected by the environment.

And I think overrall, the major problem is that it looks the people are not really touching each other. They look painted over each other to create depth, but it just seems unrealistic.

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