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Luin-Tinuviel — The Grey Morning
Published: 2014-01-19 14:54:37 +0000 UTC; Views: 1061; Favourites: 28; Downloads: 40
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Shot from this morning session. Unfortunately the weather was awful. Very cold, no snow, no sun. I hope you will appreciate it, because Kasia was very cold after this
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This shot has a lot of potential to be really amazing but I'd like to offer a few critiques, if I may.
First off, it's ever so slightly blurry, so I'd have taken a couple different shots, messing with the focus, I find it's better and I'm more likely to get one that's perfectly focused if I do this. Second of all, I'm not a fan of wide shots with the model in the center, it looks a bit... off to me, I couldn't say why but whenever I take a wide shot I either position the model across the entire photograph, or I put them off center. Though sometimes it's better to just take a portrait style photo.
Other than that it's a really great photo, keep up the good work.
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Hi, anyway - thanks for the critique! Your opinnion is fair enough for me. In matter of the backgroud I know, that it is not enough blurry. I'd like to make this picture with the lower aperture number, but the minimum aperture in my lens was only F/4.8 for 42mm focal length 
I know also, that placing model in the centre of the photo was boring, and in my newest photos I payed more attention on the composition. I am just a beginner in photography and I am still learning new lessons from my photo sessions
Anyway, once more, thanks for feedback and I hope, you will visit my site again in future to see improvments in my staff
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First off, stunning shot! Literally, all the technical things are all my opinion because this is an amazing photo!
I would have either made the back ground gritty and black and white or make her pop more.
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