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Once upon a time, before the Succubus Queen Victoria ruled over the 4th level of hell, it was the domain of the Incubus King Raife.He ruled as the third demon lord for thousands of year. He was feared and he was loved by all. For who could resist the king of all sex demons.
Things remained undisturbed for what would seem like forever...
until the day Raife made a deal with a human... named Victoria...
~Lord Dragon Master
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So this is the demon that the sword is named from?
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Okay I'm either hitting a bullseye or I missed completely, I think that Victoria used to be Raife's demon candy but she managed to win which somehow shamed Raife into stepping down and somehow Victoria came to rule as the new ruler having beaten her master at his own game and now Jonathan is in the same position Victoria was In years ago. And now Victoria is struggling not to lose her throne which invigorates her but at the same time she respects Jonathan for coming this far and would be okay if he did beat her, however she will fight to the bitter end regardless.
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Not quite!
Raife never had a demon Candy, and she never forced him to step down at all! You’ll find out soon!*
(*before 2014)
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Wow I was completely off base well I can't wait to see what actually happened 
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Woah! I thought this was Calamity until I read the description. AMAZING!
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not exactly what one would typically picture an incubus to be
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A sexy male demon dressed in leather and latex?
He is a Demon Lord, which explains the armour.
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the leather and latex is a purely succubus thing (and even then, not by any means mandatory).
in/succubi are demons of lust and, by extension, seduction. Women, for the larger part, are not turned on by men in fetish gear, so incubi that are meant to be seducers are typically portrayed in stylish suits and fashionable clothing. shirtless is also typical, but their bottom pieces will typically be normal wear. Of course, them being completely naked would be just as efficient in the proper setting. Their bodies are as enchanting to women as that of a succubus is to men.
However, what people tend to miss is that the sin of lust spreads to more than just desires of the flesh. Incubi, being the males of the race, are often also likened with blood-lust and battle craze, the thrill of the hunt, of murder and gore. The women they impregnate with their unholy brood (children of incubi always grow up to become wizards, witches, werewolves, vampires or other sorts of monstrosity) rarely survive the birthing after all.
So an incubus is much more than a genderbent version of the more popular succubus. An accurate portrayal would be very similar to that a classic vampire: A cold-blooded murderer who relished in every kill, while keeping up an air of seduction and charm to lure in his prey.
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Your whole speal is someone else's interpretation of an incubus. Not mine. That is like saying all dragons have to have green scales and red wings. You tell me when you find an actual incubus to draw data from, until then it is one persons version and my version. Each a distinct fantasy. So your description is moot.
As the story goes, my universe my rules. And I will remake them in whichever image a so choose. If you don't care for it, feel free to visit other artist who are more your taste.
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You are not criticizing my work at all. In fact you have not made 1 critical statement about the work.
You are looking at it, claiming that is not how a creature like that should look.
You make a great many assumptions for someone who clearly has no concept of the thousands of images and stories my gallery is filled with. Perhaps instead of attempting to sound like a know it all, who's greatest reference is Wikipedia, you perhaps should take a look back at your own critical thinking and ask the question: "Why is his representation of an incubus different that what i think it is?"
Perhaps then you could save both our time, by actually seeking the answer (or even asking it), instead of your shallow response, that does not speak the to art, the technique, or the story.
Your comment and I quote "not exactly what one would typically picture an incubus to be". Seems as critically deep as a puddle. You then follow up with a text book definition of what someone's design for an incubus would be. Instead of once again asking the simple question "Why isn't his like that?" You also have assumed that I have never heard of your definition of an incubus (which I have) and have clearly gone another route. In the same way that so many others have altered the definition of a succubus. Any story that sticks to the expect tradition, clearly is not comfortable making a new twist on it.
Try using your own logic, and save yourself the trouble of a wall of text comment that is not relevant nor criticizes the art or story telling. I am open to criticism, but actually make it. Don't ramble off a wall of would be facts and then claim I am not open to it.
Thanks.
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we're all missing the very important part of that story: where do I get boots like that?
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Why do I have the feeling that Victoria made a mistake by making this deal whit jon.
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What deal? This character has nothing to do with Jon.
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Love his design . . . the tail and shoes especially
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..... Is it my imagination or does Raife bear an uncanny resembelance to Jon?
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Just you sadly. Jonathan has no relationship to him!
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Cool idea, but I believe you just doomed yourself to a long, LONG chapter if you're doing to develop this angle in the storyline. XD
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Oooo... Victoria has a back story? I'd love to hear about it.
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Ok fifth time trying to leave a comment... Lol.
He's sooo... Dreamy... -drool- you out did yourself ldm...
I love the back story, leaves you plenty of room for future chapter ideas!
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Yup! the problem is I am running out of chapters!
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P.S. my cat just touched his paw to the drawing of the Incubus King. It means something I tells ya!
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I have your cat's paw of approval.
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"Beware the Incubus blade. The King never went with out his sword of damnation and submission. the sword that what destroy you're mortal body and rend your soul on to Him."
What are you talking about? What sword. There is no room in that costume for a sword. So where did he put it smart guy. Where is the Incubus' sword? Huh? He couldn't....oh...that's what you are taking about...
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PPPFTTT! LOL!
That was good, didnt see it coming. Although if her did have a weapon (not attached to his body) it would have to be something bondage related.
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What would you consider ironic?
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that victoria took his place as ruler, after he took her. btw is there going to be any of this back story explained or drawn out in future chapters??
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Ah, I see what you mean. Yup! This story will all appear somewhere (@_@) in DCP! Which is scary, cause I only have 6 chapter left.
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Well I dont want to go on forever! The main story of DCP is set to wrap up at chapter 20.
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Dont worry! DCP has almost been going for 3 years, and with 6 long chapter ahead, it likely has another 3 years to go!
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good! can't wait to see them! keep up the good work! can't wait to see if you do something new next!
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Wow.......I do not want those boots anywhere near me XD
huh, didnt know Viki was human at one point, thats a neat little plot point :3
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