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nypmhi [2016-10-12 05:03:08 +0000 UTC]

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Alright, so here's my thoughts, cons first: The Crone's Dome is a bit big, Braixen doesn't even look like it's sitting (she looks pretty upright, I suggest you should perhaps rotate the pelvis a bit so it looks like she's sitting on the stick), the right arm doesn't feel like it's laying on the stick at all if you were going for that, and I don't really know why was the closed eyes expression used (maybe I'm missing something here, just throw me a bone if I am e.deviantart.net/emoticons/let… " width="15" height="15" alt="" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="395" title=" (Lick)"/>). Now moving onto the pros: I love the lighting in this, it reminds me of the dim yellow light that emits from one of those jack o' lanterns you see when you're outside on Halloween night. The camera's angle and position is real nice as well, better than anything I could do honestly. The background models are placed quite nicely as well. Overall, it's a great poster! The only thing that needs work is Braixen's posing, and the Crone's Dome size (it looks better if it can fit on the top of her head, with the ears going through it imo).

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