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Description Once more into the Great Mouse Detective Fandom... I decided to revamp/redesign Knox and lean into her being a gerbil since that part of her was always one of my favorite things to help make her her own character. 

I mostly used this bio as a template:  www.deviantart.com/dratrelyea/…

Name: Gwendolen Evans Knox
Nicknames or Known Aliases: She prefers to be just referred too as Evans or Knox. She uses the last name "Dunn" or "Donn" for when she has to maintain a public image or when she and other members of her family have to lay low, varying what first names she uses, though she has a preferences to "Eleanor" and "Ethel". She once used the name Frederick Knox to pass herself off as a boy when younger. Her father calls her "Gwennie."
        -Meaning of names - Knox is a surname Scottish in origin and means "a hillock or a hump" 
                                       - Gwendolen is Welsh name in origin and means "white ring, circle"
                                        - Evans is also Welsh in origin and means "son of Evan" and comes from her mother's maiden name. 
                                        - Dunn is a Scottish name meaning "dark" while Donn is a Scottish name meaning "brown".
Species: Gerbil
Gender: Female
Birthday: October 13, 1865
Age (at the time of the movie): 32
Astrological sign: Libra
Nationality: British, Scottish heritage through her father. 
                Note: As an American trying to figure out if you can call a person from Scotland British since Scotland is part of the British Isles, I have to say that even after looking it up, I'm still not completely sure. So I'm just putting down both. 
Occupation: Is part of her father's smuggler gang. 
Religion: Non-practicing Presbyterian.
Language Spoken: English and Scottish Gaelic, due to her father
Native Language: She grew up with both English and Gaelic. 
    Accent?: A mix between Cockney and Scottish

Physical Appearance
        -Height: She stands at roughly the same height as Basil, being just a tiny bit taller. (around 5 heads compared)
        -Weight: A bit heavier than the average Gerbil due to muscles. 
        -Body Shape: Rather rectangle, with the middle slightly squished in. Think of like a tall milk cartoon that's bent in the middle. 
        -Voice: When compared to other female residents of Mousedom, Knox's voice sounds quite raspy. Her natural voice has her with an accent that sounds to be a mix of Scottish and Cockney due to most of her childhood having been raised in the East End. However, she is capable of sounding mostly well-spoken with a more Scottish sounding accent when the situation calls for it. 
        -Eye color: Green
        -Hair Color: Mousy Brown hair. Her fur color is just a few shades lighter.
        -Hair Style: Thick, wavy shoulder length. 
        -Key Features: Her dark ear markings. 
        -Preferred fashion/clothing: Due to mostly growing up surrounded by brothers and mostly raised by her father until her very late teens, Knox heavily prefers wearing men clothing, often a brown vest and dark pants with a favored green bandanna tied around her neck. She mostly wears this when at home or doing business in the family's work. For appearances sake or when she has to lay low, she does wear dresses, preferring blues and greens, and has a necklace with a very light amethyst that she prizes. She constantly wears pants under any dresses or skirts she has to wear.

Condition: 
        -Alcohol:
Knox has a love for a good fashion pint, but prefers to not drink often since she's a mean drunk. 
        -Smoker: Knox is quite a heavy smoker.
        -Drugs: While she's been exposed to several drugs due to the smuggling business, she makes it a rule to not try the stuff personally. She won't even touch opium due to allergies.  
        -Allergies: Knox has an opioid allergy. 
        -Physical disabilities or illnesses: Knox is constantly active, though her smoking hasn't left her with the best lungs. 
        -Mental Illnesses: OCD and undiagnosed post traumatic stress disorder. 
        -Regular medication: None
        -Phobias: Iatrophobia (fear of doctors) Pupaphobia (Fear of puppets.)
Personality:
        -Personality: Knox is serious, no-nonsense, strict, often unamused, and quite intelligent. She's far from classy and doesn't tend to care much for others that are outside of her normal circle. She's both street smart and book smart, having a love of learning and is quite an avid reader. There's a constant method in her approach to things and when things do go as normal or well, she gets quite paranoid for a decent amount of time. She's quite protective of her family and is very much a daddy's girl. Knox places her own crew second to her family and always makes sure to look out for them. She doesn't seem to really care much about her position in society as a woman, but she is aware of it and makes hard attempts to seem "proper" in society eyes...
        -Distinctive habits and/or maneuvers: Is a very light sleeper, constantly folds the corner of pages as she reads, twirls a coin between her fingers when bored, right hand clenches right before she throws a punch, left hand clenches before she kicks, sleeps with a gun under her pillow.
        -Likes: Reading, a good ol' pint, various types of music, wearing pants. 
        -Dislikes: Her first name, misbehaving or disrespectful members of her family's business, several of her old college classmates.  
        -Goals: Help her family's smuggling business, keep everything in order
        -Dreams: Knox doesn't' dream much, preferring to live in the present and focus on what she has in the now. 
        -Fears: Doctors and puppets are big ones. Losing her family and lifestyle. 
        -Favorite things: Several Shakespearean Works, her family, walking around is more masculine clothing. 
        -Least favorite things: A Midsummer Night's Dream, getting asked if she's Irish or part Irish, when some of her crew decide to "sample" some of the smuggled goods. 
Abilities: Is both book smart and street smart, is quite educated, is quick to notice anything that's out of order. Has a mind for business and is stronger than most mice. Can act "proper" and mimic others' behaviors easily.  
Talents and skills: Quite strong due to the weight of some of the shipments of goods, a decent actress, and is a quick shot. 
Supernatural talents and skills: None

Home:
    -Their house and/or home: She spends half her time living with her father, step-mother, and two of her step-brothers in a two story house right on the edge of the East End that's full of several belongings gathered over time by the family. The other half is spent living on her own in one of the safe houses, preferably a two-story house with belongings that mostly belong to her, mostly full bookcases lining several of the walls.  
    -Significant/ important belongings: She's quite proud of a silver chain light amethyst necklace she often wears with her dresses. 
    -Pets: She has little love for pets, but is able to tolerate her step-mother's fondness for caterpillar. 
Work
    -Level of education: Attended basic education, plus college under the alias Fredrick Knox, learned basic effeminate and domestic manners from step-mother Madeline and step-sister Bertha, tutoring from a former professor of her college.
    -Qualifications: Years of working in her father's smuggling business, lessons from step-mother on acting and how to seem proper in society's eyes, is a learned chemist and explosives expert. 
    -Current job title and description: Smuggler/Criminal
    -Name of employer: Her father, Lachlan Knox. 

Combat:
    -Peaceful or aggressive attitude: Knox doesn't care much for words during a fight, instead just aiming to hit her opponent. 
    -Fighting skills/ techniques: She tends to switch between being very physical in fighting or just plain shooting, depending on if the fight itself is a brawl or not. 
    -Weapon of choice: She's not oppose to using her fists and legs, but she has a favorite small pistol revolver. 
    -Strengths in combat: Her father and the majority of her childhood having been in the East End taught her and her brother how to handle a fight. Years of helping smuggling goods that can be quite heavy has helped her build up muscles, making her strong enough to keep up with the rest of the crew.

Family, Friends, and Foes:
    Mother: Nelly Evans(maiden name) Knox (birth mother), Grella Smith (maiden name) Knox (former Step-mother), Madeline Whiskers (maiden name) Knox (step-mother)
    Father: Lachlan Knox
Parents alive or dead: Father is alive, birth mother and first step-mother died when young, current step-mother is alive. 
    Relationship with parents: Is a complete daddy's girl, Father and daughter are very close. Knox has a few memories about Nelly before her death and missed her quite a lot, her death being the reason for her PSTD, and her relationship with Grella was decent at best and very stressed and bitter at worst. Her relationship with Madeline took sometime to grow, but she admires her current step-mother for her patience. 
  Birth order: youngest child from her mother, second to youngest in the entire order
Siblings: Calum Knox (older brother, Age 39), Fraser Knox (older brother, Age 37), Finlay Knox (older brother, Age 35), James Wright (older step-brother, Age 35), Bertha Plumbell (older step-sister, Age 37), John Whitetail-Knox (older step-brother, Age 33), Gregory Whitetail-Knox (younger step-brother, Age 28), Lucian Plumbell (brother-in-law, Age 40)
Relationship with siblings: 
                   
-Calum: She looks up to her eldest brother and used to constantly follow him around when younger. 
                    -Fraser: The two of them use to have a sibling rivalry for Calum's attention but have now are closer due to the event of their mother's death.
                    -Finlay: She'd been used to learning everything right by Finlay's side as a child, but as they grew they drifted apart in key interests. 
                    -James: The two are the ones that still bicker with each other and are a bit stained. James's relation to most of the family is strained in general. Knox thinks he's a wimp while James thinks she's a brute.
                    -Bertha: Due having had grown up with three brothers before their parents married, the two took awhile to really get use to. They're far from close, but they care enough to have each other's backs. 
                    -John: With only a year difference between them, they're the closest out of the siblings and both are protective of Gregory. 
                    -Gregory: Is the only sibling younger than her, and she's quite protective of him. 
Best friend(s): Two of the family's gang members Harvey Redburn and Merriweather Lee
Other significant friends: Agnes Kitty and Abigail Kitty (Miss Kitty's unnamed twin sisters), Earl Carter, most of her crew, Fidget, William Morris, Jim Moran Ratigan, Professor Padraic Ratigan, Helena I. Riverfield
Rivals or enemies: Basil of Baker Street, Thomas Carter, David Q. Dawson, Colonel Sebastian James Ratigan, Alexander Riverfield, Johnathon Shaw, Harold Bennett, Anna H. Blair 
Other Facts: Whenever Knox tries to hide her accent to mimic other ladies, she usually ends up with still having a pronounced Scottish accent. 

Bio: 
    
Childhood from birth to the age of 12: The youngest child born in the East End of London to Scottish smuggler Lachlan Knox and Nelly nee Evans, Gwendolen grew up with three older rowdy brothers. The East End of London was known for a reputation for crime and poverty of the time. Lachlan had little qualms about raising his daughter the same as his sons to help them survive in such a neighborhood and Nelly barely knew how to raise three rowdy sons, nevertheless a new, equally rowdy daughter. With Lachlan's small smuggling business seeming to remain steady, the family seemed to have an otherwise normal life until Gwendolen was around seven, when Nelly is attacked and killed by a rival gang with Gwendolen is barely able to hide and escape. While Lachlan gets revenge, Gwendolen refuses to be called by her full first name. Several safe-houses are set up by Lachlan's gang both for his children's safety and the growth of his gang from his revenge run. Around the age of eleven, Lachlan marries widow Grella nee Smith Wright, bringing in her son James and daughter Bertha. 
    Describe their teenage years from 13 – 20: Grella struggles to try and bring Gwendolen up as a proper lady with the help of Bertha with little success. Around age of thirteen, Grella becomes sick and succumbs to consumption. Gwendolen begins to work in the growing family business at around fifteen, a year later Lachlan begins courting and later marrying another widow named Madeline Whiskers, who in turn brings in her own sons John and Gregory. Gwendolen seeks further, higher education. Attends college under the alias Frederick Knox and begins a rivalry with some of her fellow classmates, Basil, Riverfield, Shaw, and Bennett. 
    Adult years upward from the age of 20: Receives education, and requests further teaching from her former professor Ratigan as he begins to build his criminal empire. Later focuses on family business as its operations expands, with not much really notable aside from the gang's important interactions with other gangs, building up a decent network of security method of 'if we go down, you go down' until James Wright decides to get cocky and try and leek information about the gangs to the police in exchange for a lighter sentence or pardon of the crimes for himself. This caused quite a huge strain in the family and gangs as James is all but disowned by the family and Basil of Baker Street proceeds to break down on several circles of theirs, including Ratigan's Tower Bridge Job.
The events of 1897 had Gwendolen helping in making sure that the interconnected criminal family doesn't loose its head as Ratigan's dragged out of the river and stays on the low as the Napoleon of Crime heals from intense injures. 
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AlcyoneSong97 [2023-02-05 05:30:12 +0000 UTC]

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Godforoth [2019-12-15 17:40:59 +0000 UTC]

neat design

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