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Published: 2012-11-05 19:34:58 +0000 UTC; Views: 2176; Favourites: 64; Downloads: 7
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Sister sketch of
Puck, Sabrina; The Sisters Grimm © Michael BuckleyRelated content
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Okay, first off I just want to squee about the fact you've drawn a SG fanart again ;3 and that always makes me happy.
Now for the actual critiquing. I've got three major positive things, and one negative things (I couldnt think of a better word than negative, sorry):
Positive: I liked that you did the gradient. It was nice- its adding more contrast to the sketch, and it's pleasing. Not too dark, not too light or too fast. Good. e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s… " width="15" height="15" alt="
I also loved the facial expressions, especially Puck's. Straight on.
And you know what's my favorite part of this? That you used my shirt design from one of my first sketches. I see what you did there a.deviantart.net/avatars/o/h/o… " alt=" " title="ohstopyouplz" />
Negative (still wish I had a better word): Puck's anatomy is.... Wonky. There's no other word for it. It's wonky. His arm looks like its being pulled out of his socket, and his legs... I don't even know what's going on with them. One looks like its super skinny, and the other is just curled weird. Believe me, I know how hard foreshortening can be, but it's just... Off. (Oh look, there is another word for it.)
On the whole, it's a decent sketch, with a touch of awesomeness. Good job. e.deviantart.net/emoticons/w/w… " width="15" height="15" alt="
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Thanks! Yeah... the arm. I downloaded this really great app that lets me pose these little characters for drawing, but I don't think I used it right ._.
You noticed
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You're welcome~ 
I did. It made my day
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I have no idea if you still read these comments, but is it okay if I use this as a cover image for my fanfiction? It's on fanfiction.net, and it's called "This Thing Called War".
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Awesome. Thank you so much!
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Oh, hey, I just noticed this: Where you've got "Sister sketch of..." you put a thumbnail of this same picture. You might want to fix that.
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This is great! I'm glad your doing SG fanart again.
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Haha...Love it!
Just one thing...Puck's legs: ?
I mean, I know you can't be perfect all the time. (But you had me going...)
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I submitted it to the group, but I'm pretty sure it needs an admin to allow it in. And you're an admin, right? So you can do that, maybe... why can't you upload it in the first place? That's weird.
Also, awesome drawing. Their faces make me want to laugh with sheer Puckabrinaish joy. And of course, Sabrina's going to punch him any second now....
And I was totally going to do a Book 9 tribute too, and never did, and now I feel bad for even thinking about it because it would have failed miserably compared to yours...
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Aww, don't say that! I'm sure it would have been great
And thanks, I don't really know what's going on with the group, but ever since I became co-founder I got an error message when submitting
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Thanks, but you're kind of undisputedly the most epic SG fanartist of all time, so...
Maybe there are some weird restrictions on you or something? I know that back in the admin area you can set who can and can't submit. Maybe it's set so co-founders can't for some reason. You can see if you can change it yourself. 
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between homestuck and sg... i looked at puck's shirt symbol rly quickly and i'm like DAVE STRI- oh wait stahp wat r u doin journey that is puck
i missed your sg fanart ;w; <33
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shame on u for neglecting your dutys... pff who cares about homework
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colleges and universities
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