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Published: 2018-06-03 06:34:52 +0000 UTC; Views: 139472; Favourites: 896; Downloads: 0
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Description A/N: Sorry for a week of delay, but then again, you gotta admit this is more frequent update than I used to be, eh?

Anyway, there will be delay in my schedule in the the future nonetheless, but I trust my loyal readers are patient enough to think this is worth the wait ^w^

Next week: new page of "Children's Play"! OR, maybe another chapter for "The Story Continues". If not those two, then could be something else XD


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Story, art, OCs (Kaze, Sapphire, Darren, Benonic etc.), and Cosium Universe by ME

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TheFluffyIdiot [2020-12-22 17:02:41 +0000 UTC]

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Wispthekitsune [2020-10-30 14:47:52 +0000 UTC]

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TheTrashmaster87 [2020-07-28 06:16:02 +0000 UTC]

Trails is gonna git it

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skyendercraft [2018-07-19 19:50:47 +0000 UTC]

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The art style looks like the actual sonic comic books.when i see this comic it brings me back to my childhood of reading the actual comics. The story right now is interesting and I may know what is going on in both of the comics of teen and children but i won't talk about it here. Anyway the story and art style are really great up to this point and hope that you keep creating great looking comics and stories.
I know their is a rating system on the right that shows only five stars so ill show my rating.

Art style - 10/10
Story - 9/10
Originality - 10/10

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Maylie-Ann-Drawing [2018-06-08 13:26:12 +0000 UTC]

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I just like that. It's been a while since I read the adventures of the three hedgehogs, both in Children's Play and in Teen's Play. It always made me laugh a lot, really a lot. The images are well made, the colors are beautifully chosen and the characters are endearing. I loved it when Trails approached the books, as well as when he was sitting on them to read. Really, I think you've been told millions of times, even me, but ... have you ever sent a request to work with Sega ??? Ha Ha ... I really think you'd do a good job. I love Darren too, and I think he's really cool. Sometimes I laugh alone like crazy so it's funny. Really, keep it up, do not stop, I love it !!!

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Sarita116 [2018-06-04 14:45:09 +0000 UTC]

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Its funny how they react to being in another zone and another time AGAIN. Its really great how they are interacting to find a way ot where they are.
Trails seems to be familiariza he is more strangely calm since after all this adventure he will be completely grounded by Darren. Funny how Silver thinks he is cursed since this time travel and time hopping always happens to him. And always Darren taking control over the situation.

Lets get techninque. The contrast of the shadows and the light are really well balanced. The details added at the background makes it look like a real study room. The little detail you add on the characters and the background only the basics make it look more characteristic like the old Sonic The Hedgehog comics and that is really out standing.

Really great work keep it up with the series

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nightmare56394 [2018-06-03 13:35:15 +0000 UTC]

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This series is really compelling it’s an interesting story the OC’s you have created the way they interact and sonics shadows and silvers reaction to the situation their I. Alongside the way the characters interact with act each other really brings in a feeling of what’s gonna happen next I am a patient person I can wait I honestly want to see what happens next my friend keep up the good work side note I recommend a scene where the sonic shadow and silver that are the royal kids meet their freedom fighters counterparts aka the sonic shadow and silver who are stuck in cosium

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LoveGeopy [2020-05-19 05:26:28 +0000 UTC]

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wolfpup9404 [2019-11-14 21:52:34 +0000 UTC]

finally reading all this. Poor Silver, getting dragged into things again

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ADRIANACRAK [2019-08-03 18:04:00 +0000 UTC]

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CreeperFlowey [2019-06-01 03:34:59 +0000 UTC]

Panel 4: Liyu, did Nymph curse Silver, to possibly get revenge on Kaze, Darren, and Sapphire? Just askin'

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Firestormthedragolf [2019-04-04 19:47:00 +0000 UTC]

Shadow: no dip SherlockΒ 

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MarialineHamato In reply to Firestormthedragolf [2020-06-06 00:47:57 +0000 UTC]

Ah yes ^^

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Esticalover1 [2018-09-17 15:52:42 +0000 UTC]

I love this series I find all the characters adorable and loveable

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midnightrose1520 [2018-09-01 07:41:48 +0000 UTC]

X,D aw man sliver cracked me up lol poor guy

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JJSpeedpelt [2018-08-15 18:21:49 +0000 UTC]

Aw, Trails looks cute running towards his books. <3

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MarialineHamato In reply to JJSpeedpelt [2020-06-06 00:48:23 +0000 UTC]

Trails: Yay, books!
:3

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gabrielthewolf15 [2018-08-11 18:37:59 +0000 UTC]

ah time travel poor silver will never get away from it

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Sir-Duke01 [2018-08-11 18:22:23 +0000 UTC]

NANI?!

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AdventTutly [2018-08-11 17:36:21 +0000 UTC]

This is so nicely drawn and written you should try amping up your ideas to maximum, like getting the entire story done in page. Still like it.

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Kiri711 [2018-08-02 03:26:37 +0000 UTC]

Oh Silver honey you really don't have luck lol Missing these guys! I wanna see them meet Benonic (I really didn't understand the online phemonam of having a Cinnamon roll character until I read Benonic's story *A thousand hearts*

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jak301 [2018-07-30 00:07:23 +0000 UTC]

are you still ative please ansews yours comics fill the voild of sonic comics please give the end he deserve.

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LiyuConberma In reply to jak301 [2018-08-02 04:48:47 +0000 UTC]

I am alive, and a new page of Children's Play has been uploaded, Teen's Play will be up next week.

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MaxiMaster666 [2018-07-24 04:56:10 +0000 UTC]

WHEN ARE THE NEST PAGES OF THIS AND CHILDRENS PLAY COMING OUT PLZ ANSWER IM BEING DEPRIVED OF GOOD SONIC COMICS TO READ

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LiyuConberma In reply to MaxiMaster666 [2018-08-02 04:48:59 +0000 UTC]

The new page of Children's Play is up now XD

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MaxiMaster666 In reply to LiyuConberma [2018-08-03 06:06:50 +0000 UTC]

YAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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XxFiniteUndeadxX [2018-07-18 07:49:54 +0000 UTC]

I swear that all the faces in this comic just keeps getting better XD

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Shadowninja38 [2018-07-15 22:13:54 +0000 UTC]

Yes SILVER you are cursed.

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FandomRant03 [2018-07-15 18:48:05 +0000 UTC]

When is the next page of Child's Play and Teen's Play gonna come out! (-~-) I've waited for a few weekends now.

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LiyuConberma In reply to FandomRant03 [2018-08-02 04:49:18 +0000 UTC]

New page of Children's Play just up now. ^w^

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FandomRant03 In reply to LiyuConberma [2018-08-06 00:00:58 +0000 UTC]

*rushes to post*
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I took too too long to reply. Oh well. :b

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LaCaricaturista [2018-07-11 03:12:34 +0000 UTC]

Can we just appreciate Shadows face XD

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LiyuConberma In reply to LaCaricaturista [2018-07-11 04:33:35 +0000 UTC]

lol glad to see someone appreciate that small part of drawing

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LaCaricaturista In reply to LiyuConberma [2018-07-11 06:54:21 +0000 UTC]

I love it sm XD

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Jedi-Bluebird In reply to LaCaricaturista [2018-07-15 18:08:41 +0000 UTC]

Make it an icon.

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HyperSilver2342 [2018-06-30 18:59:03 +0000 UTC]

NEXT PART PLEASEΒ 

SO SONIC SHADOW AND SILVER ARE BROTHERS ? AND THE THREE COMING FROM THE PAST ?

I CAN'T WAIT THE NEXT

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missmangaartist1 [2018-06-29 18:45:06 +0000 UTC]

you should have a link to the First page on these.

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LiyuConberma In reply to missmangaartist1 [2018-08-02 04:49:56 +0000 UTC]

Here's the Issue 1:Β www.deviantart.com/liyuconberm…

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OtomeFangurl [2018-06-28 14:35:20 +0000 UTC]

I’m on the edge of my seat of this story and I love it! I can’t wait to see what is brought to the table. 10 outta 10! Keep up the great work! Β  Β Β 

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lily56T [2018-06-28 12:23:07 +0000 UTC]

me: I hate to break it for you butΒ yesΒ Β  Β 
silver : WHAT !?

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MarialineHamato In reply to lily56T [2020-06-06 00:48:49 +0000 UTC]

XD

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idijacreepy [2018-06-24 21:15:49 +0000 UTC]

love it!!! SilverΒ  is so funny HAHAHAHAH

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OtakuGirl4536 [2018-06-23 15:11:02 +0000 UTC]

I'm so excited for the next picture

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SpyroDragonART In reply to OtakuGirl4536 [2018-06-23 15:38:03 +0000 UTC]

Me too

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JanikaCheetah [2018-06-14 12:28:43 +0000 UTC]

Honestly I think the biggest question isn't where/when they are, but how an object in another zone managed to drag those three in at all.

I can't help chuckling at Silver's response. Poor guy. He always seems to get sucked into these things--but at least he tends to have a good attitude about it. I'm liking the study here, and it's definitely fun to guess what the purpose of all his doohickeys might be. Oooooh! Are the globes set on the walls supposed to be moon crystals? Ha! Those papers must be pretty important if Darren is carefully looking through them during a disaster this big.

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2o2o-97 [2018-06-14 01:36:32 +0000 UTC]

AGAIN! XD

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DiamondTheHedgehog11 [2018-06-13 21:40:16 +0000 UTC]

So good. Also it’s been like four weeks since we’ve gotten an update on Children’s Play and one week in Teens Play. Just letting you knowΒ 

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LiyuConberma In reply to DiamondTheHedgehog11 [2018-06-14 00:45:14 +0000 UTC]

pretty sure it's not that long. but sadly, things have not gone as smoothly as planned.BUT, i always try to upload an artwork once a week.

please remember that I'm only a human who also has a career and unexpected events going on with my life.

You have to admit, i have been rather attentive on Children's Play and Teen's Play more than usual.

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DiamondTheHedgehog11 In reply to LiyuConberma [2018-06-14 01:05:53 +0000 UTC]

I know. I figured something happened and didn’t over react. Plus the wait works for Children’s play since it last left off with Shadow seeing Jules at the door and we’re all dying to know what happens next. Hope things get a little back on track for you Liyu.

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kingdariusx [2018-06-13 09:35:41 +0000 UTC]

I love this series too

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