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Lionnfart — graveside friends
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Published: 2019-08-24 00:43:36 +0000 UTC; Views: 1817; Favourites: 31; Downloads: 0
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Description confession one.

I’ve wanted to watch them fall,
So when I do,
I won’t be alone.
I won’t burn to the ground
And settle down as ash
With no one around.
There will be comfort with my bones,
My own friends, hundreds of homes,
But only if they give up too.
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Comments: 13

Eefera [2020-02-17 01:08:01 +0000 UTC]

What a fabulous twist on this!
I love it. 

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Lionnfart In reply to Eefera [2020-02-17 02:35:34 +0000 UTC]

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cursors-and-ellipses [2020-01-19 10:31:52 +0000 UTC]

This poem really does give me so many feelings and I loved seeing it discussed in the chat! It's a poem that will haunt me, and the power you have given it is quite wonderful. 

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Lionnfart In reply to cursors-and-ellipses [2020-01-19 16:20:49 +0000 UTC]

Thank you so, so much! It’s genuinely flattering, still such a surprise that it’s gotten any attention. Excited to see more work from you!

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cursors-and-ellipses In reply to Lionnfart [2020-01-20 01:35:33 +0000 UTC]

No problem! It really does deserve that attention, even if you are surprised. Thank-you! I look forwards to seeing more work from you too.

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silvernium [2019-12-20 07:33:18 +0000 UTC]

what is confession two, intrigue wants to know.
congratulations on your dd!!

ash and dust,
only 
as we must.

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Lionnfart In reply to silvernium [2019-12-20 15:22:58 +0000 UTC]

Thank you! I will probably continue the series after the dd, I didn’t think it deserved a follow up.

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silvernium In reply to Lionnfart [2019-12-23 07:56:33 +0000 UTC]

Just follow it up, if you feel that you want to. I for one, vote yes, however 🙂

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Lionnfart In reply to silvernium [2019-12-23 15:07:44 +0000 UTC]

thank you for the encouragement.

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YouInventedMe [2019-12-20 05:17:43 +0000 UTC]

Congrats on the DD!

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Lionnfart In reply to YouInventedMe [2019-12-20 05:22:04 +0000 UTC]

thank you!

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LindArtz [2019-12-20 03:42:37 +0000 UTC]

Very nicely done!!

Congratulations on your much deserved DD!  !


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Lionnfart In reply to LindArtz [2019-12-20 04:40:27 +0000 UTC]

wow! thank you so much! this is very surprising! I don't know what to say. just thanks.

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