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Description I've been talking to a few friends about a Command tumblr blog.It would be about Apple Bloom going back to the village in the ever free.

Takes place 10 years after the she the story of the blanks.

Apple Bloom belongs to: Hasbro/Lauren Faust 


Here's my idea please excuse any errors and or miss details on the actually story on the game.

It was ten years ago,ten years ah been tormented,tortured by the horrors ah saw that day.ah
guess this is where ah should begin my story for y'all to.Understand why ah'm...like this.

As ah said before,it was ten years ago.It was Friday ah rekoned.Ah was out in the fields,trying to think of a way to keep my self entertained.Scootaloo,was gone with Rainbow Dash,while Sweetie Belle was home helping her sister with dresses.

It wasn't a surprise that ah was bored out me mind that day,so ah decided a nice little walk would do me right.To be honest,ah wish never took that walk.As ah made my way towards the dirt road that lead out of mah farm home,ah spotted a familiar unicorn trotting towards the Everfree.Twilight Sparkle,was the unicorn trotting in the forest.Being the young,curious,and rather stupid filly ah was, ah trotted towards her location.

Of course Twilight was caught off guard by mah presence,but she didn't seemed to fazed by it.

"Oh,Apple Bloom,you scared me,"she spoke in a slight startled voice.Ah asked her where she was heading,what was she doing,typical foal questions.She told me that she was heading going to see Zecora,and that she needed to her help with something.Ah of course thought this would be a great chance to solve mah boredom problem.Heck,ah could earn my cutie mark by chance of going.But,of course Twilight interjected my request.

"No Apple Bloom it's too dangerous for a foal like yourself,"she spoke in the most expected adult tone.

After a few long pleads,she gave in allowing me to follow her into the forest.once we was in,we reached Zecora's hut.Nothing special really happened no cutie mark either.After they finished with..whatever it was they were doing,It started to get late.
Bidding our farewells,Twilight and ah left Zecora alone in her hut.As we made our way back home,Twilight let out a groan.Curious I looked from behind her,seeing a tree blocking our path.Twilight asked me to stay back,as she used her magic to remove the tree.

Seeing it was gonna be awhile,I sat on a near by stump.
That's....that is where my life of hell began.Well seeing Twilight clearing out a few more trees,ah notice something glowing.Eyes...eyes belong to a filly around my age.Before ah could react,she vanished into the forest.Ah gave chase following the filly,which lead me away from Twilight,and getting lost within the forest.
As ah looked around trying to retrace my steps,or find the filly,ah saw a clearing from the tree.Curious,ah approached the clearing.Leading me into a village.That same village that torments me in my dreams,cause paranoia in my mind,dementia in mah sights.

The village that ah thought was a ordinary isolated place,was a lie homes decayed beyond repair,vegetation taking root into the destroyed homes.This village was a ghost town,ah only knew this when ah discovered a decayed corpse in a fireplace in a abandoned house further back in the forest.
Ah never felt so fuckin scared in mah life.Ah left that house when galloping back into the village,or what was left of it.

Mah instinct told me to run,to leave,and find Twilight.That's when ah heard it,a voice calling out from behind me.

"We had to do it we had to kill her.She bore the curse mark!But you won't be like her.We will protect from her,and you will stay with us forvere,"that voice was the most terrifying voice ah ever heard.Demonic,and echo like almost as though.It had two voice fighting with each other to take control.
Mah biggest mistake,was turning to face that thing.Decayed,rotten,and maggot infested pony staring deep into my soul.
Ah was horrified,stuck as though a unknown force held me down.Ah notice that more of "It" began to emerge from the ground.
Ah don't know what happen,but ah remember running away as they chased me.That's when ah saw her.the filly,who was named Ruby.She told me about her fate,her cutie mark being the cause of her death.She helped me escape that horrid place,and back in the safety of a worried Twilight.

Now you think after that.Everything would be just...alright,but it wasn't.After that event, ah went through series of nightmares,hallucinations,and pure paranoia.But that's not the breaking point.One day,Sweetie Belle came over,and wanted to play for a bit.At that time, was so tired from lack of sleep,tired from constant hallucinations.But was willing to play with her hoping it could win back mah life,but...it didn't instead ah found myself.Strangling a frightened unicorn filly what was my friend.Big Mac came in time,and manage to get me away from her.

It was the final straw for them.They had no other choice,but send me here into this institute of the insane.
ten years ten years ah spend my life day in and day out.Going through therapy,taking medication,and undergoing many brain scans.


Apple Bloom 

Age:20 

Given leave from institute on condition,she continue her seasons.Along with taking her medication,and anti depressants.

Ah sat there on a chair,waiting for the the nurse to stamp the paper for my release.
A lot had change over the ten year course.Mah sister leaving the farm with a stallion,Big Mac staring a family with mah old teacher Cheerlie,Granny Smiths death,and my friends getting their cutie marks as mine never came yet.

After they stamped the sheet,and released me from this place ah called home.Ah returned back to mah real home,or at least that's what kept telling myself.
Things had been hard on me,ah became distant,isolated,and very skittzy.Everypony was worried even Twilight,but ah always pushed them away.including mah family.They wouldn't understand they could.

That's when ah had a thought.What if that filly was the reason ah suffer?What if she needs me to free here?
It was crazy thought,but ah was willing to do anything to be free.Gather my bags,medication,and food. Ah made my way into the forest,and back to where my hell had begun.



Intro ended
sorry had to cut a few corners,but i hope this was
at least decent enough for ya
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Comments: 33

AKELEUCTIOR [2017-02-19 05:57:27 +0000 UTC]

NICE APPLE BLOOM!! YOU GO PONE YOU CAN DO EETT!!!!! \>w👍: 0 ⏩: 0

thefan2 [2015-03-22 00:51:25 +0000 UTC]

she looks awesome and I love the drawing style

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LiiflessWolf In reply to thefan2 [2015-03-22 01:02:49 +0000 UTC]

You really think so? 

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thefan2 In reply to LiiflessWolf [2015-03-22 01:03:26 +0000 UTC]

yeah I love her expression it shows her fear pretty good

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LiiflessWolf In reply to thefan2 [2015-03-22 01:12:55 +0000 UTC]

awesome thanks for that!

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thefan2 In reply to LiiflessWolf [2015-03-22 01:13:20 +0000 UTC]

your welcome ma'ma or sir.

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LiiflessWolf In reply to thefan2 [2015-03-22 01:36:33 +0000 UTC]

i'm a sir XD

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thefan2 In reply to LiiflessWolf [2015-03-22 01:37:57 +0000 UTC]

your welcome sir

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MetalBladePegasus [2015-03-21 23:34:43 +0000 UTC]

And again you do not disappoint, your shading and usage of tones makes this a really good drawing. I wish I could tell more about the setting and story itself, but I am a blank regarding the subject. However some  of the main concepts are not unfamiliar to me and the wa she looks,, going back to the village...cautious, aware and disturbed. Truly a nice one.
The way you kept her eventual cutie mark hidden under that saddle bag, neat.

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LiiflessWolf In reply to MetalBladePegasus [2015-03-21 23:47:10 +0000 UTC]

Actually I had a debate about her cutie mark.My friends suggest I leave her flank blank,considering she spent 10 years 
in a mental institute.
I'm also glad you got the look I was going for,and your compliments knows no bounds when comes to flatter me.
The story will be her returning to end her nightmares,her dementia,and her suffer.BY going back,finding the dead filly's body,and giving her a
proper burial.
That's what I'm going for at least.

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MetalBladePegasus In reply to LiiflessWolf [2015-03-22 00:14:13 +0000 UTC]

And I have to point that one out: you see, you do have that skill in writing, that reply was kept in the tone of a pro. Keep on going brother, you just might not know what lies within you when it comes to writing.
And I like the whole idea, bit disturbing and creepy. I should have given that story a read.

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LiiflessWolf In reply to MetalBladePegasus [2015-03-22 00:15:53 +0000 UTC]

How about I write a intro one her situation

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MetalBladePegasus In reply to LiiflessWolf [2015-03-22 00:20:35 +0000 UTC]

How about do it right fucking now?!
I'd love to see you put in spin!

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LiiflessWolf In reply to MetalBladePegasus [2015-03-22 00:32:25 +0000 UTC]

on it hopefully my mind showed work in function it'll be in notes 

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MetalBladePegasus In reply to LiiflessWolf [2015-03-22 19:12:05 +0000 UTC]

I'm glad you decided to put that story part under the drawing, it is good and sets the mood perfectly.

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LiiflessWolf In reply to MetalBladePegasus [2015-03-22 19:17:43 +0000 UTC]

www.youtube.com/watch?v=itMd1_…

this also sets the mood too I brings emotion out of her words 

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Penguinator24 [2015-03-21 18:19:41 +0000 UTC]

Sounds like an interesting blog. I'd definately follow it.

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LiiflessWolf In reply to Penguinator24 [2015-03-21 23:43:17 +0000 UTC]

Thank you kindly for that my friend 

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Penguinator24 In reply to LiiflessWolf [2015-03-22 04:34:48 +0000 UTC]

 No problem.

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Rotorix [2015-03-21 14:12:56 +0000 UTC]

Interesting idea.
Though, nice work with the drawings. 

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LiiflessWolf In reply to Rotorix [2015-03-21 23:47:28 +0000 UTC]

Thank you comrade awesome to hear from ya 

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Rotorix In reply to LiiflessWolf [2015-03-21 23:49:11 +0000 UTC]

Always a pleasure to see art from you, comrade.

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LiiflessWolf In reply to Rotorix [2015-03-21 23:49:47 +0000 UTC]

that means a lot to me man thanks you 

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DJMorphasis [2015-03-21 04:52:55 +0000 UTC]

Awesome ^^

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LiiflessWolf In reply to DJMorphasis [2015-03-21 23:47:38 +0000 UTC]

thanks man good to hear from you 

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DJMorphasis In reply to LiiflessWolf [2015-03-22 06:22:13 +0000 UTC]

^^

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ZeroZi [2015-03-21 04:30:38 +0000 UTC]

awesome~

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LiiflessWolf In reply to ZeroZi [2015-03-21 23:47:44 +0000 UTC]

thanks friend 

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ZeroZi In reply to LiiflessWolf [2015-03-21 23:49:04 +0000 UTC]

np~

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LiiflessWolf In reply to ZeroZi [2015-03-21 23:49:56 +0000 UTC]

be safe friend 

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ZeroZi In reply to LiiflessWolf [2015-03-21 23:51:02 +0000 UTC]

you too~

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EdenScorpio26 [2015-03-21 04:29:44 +0000 UTC]

ohh cool.

Warning, i'm a blank.

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LiiflessWolf In reply to EdenScorpio26 [2015-03-21 23:47:55 +0000 UTC]

looks like you'll be fine then 

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