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lessa-ok β Let me hold your hand
Published: 2013-05-07 09:12:15 +0000 UTC; Views: 813; Favourites: 20; Downloads: 0
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This is a single page that I made with (:Translation:
- Ah!
- W-what?
- Let me hold your hand.
It was important to you, right?
- C-can I?
- (yep)
(This may have been something simple and innocent for him)
(But this gesture meant more to me.)
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Comments: 28
Your style itself is very cute, the detail is amazing, I am very impressed with the way that you were able to draw all of the detail with a pencil and still managed to make it look so 'clean'!.
The transition from each box is very nice, doesn't have any of that awkward pausing.
I can't really say that there needs to be much fixing, the backgrounds were a nice touch, and again, impressed with the detail for everything being drawn by hand.
Although, the hands themselves look awkward. Proportionally the hands look great! But the angle of the hand in the third box, as the man is placing his hand out is awkward. Not his whole hand, but his pinky. From the viewers perspective the pinky looks as if it is being bent in a painful angle. All his other fingers look as if we are viewing it from the side, but that pinky is really throwing it off.
As for the girl in the fourth panel, as she ask 'what?', her face doesn't really show any signs of 'surprise' or 'confusion' her facial features are very static.
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owo Very well done! Along with JMeh's comment, I'd like to say that the hand in the "Ah!" panel seems a bit off. ;w; The only problem I had with it was the thumb, which seems to be placed a bit further up the hand than normal. Sliding it back just a bit would fix it, I believe. 
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Thank you for the comment. I'm not good at drawing hands (they usually get worse than this..) but I'll get better (:
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Well, let me just heap on some.. POSITIVE REINFORCEMENT!
*layers positive reinforcement with cement*
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Wee~ Thank you very much XD
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It's such a cute story! 0u0 I like the detail to the backgrounds and such
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very nicely done. the layouts good, and so is the art.
its such a sweet little story XD holding hands can be so romantic.
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Hoo~ thank you very much XD
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ARHGHGHHGHGHGHG
THIS.
IS.
TOO.
CUTE *A*
AMGGGG HNNNGGGGG
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AEHUAEHUAHEUAHEAHE LOL
Thankies~
Nice reaction~ XD
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No problem, and thank you as well~
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IT'S JUST TOO CUTEEEEE QWQ
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whooooooa que legal que ficou! xD amo seu estilo de desenho :3 tipo,Γ© do tipo que parece divertido de se desenhar
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de nada xD N sei pq mas o estilo me lembra um pouco "kaicho wa maid-sama"...O meu jΓ‘ dizem que se parece com kuroshituji....mas acho que isso Γ© por causa do meu OC novo,o Niro (Niro Γ© apelido mas Γ© fofo xD)
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LOL Quem me dera se meu traço fosse parecido com o de kaichou aohoiaehoaiheaid
O traço de kuroshitsuji é bonito mesmo o-o
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AtΓ© hoje sΓ³ desenhei o Ciel e o Alois...NUNCA consegui desenhar o Sebastian :<
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LOL SΓ³ desenhando os shotas -q
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AHEUAheAUheUAheUahEUhaUEHAUEH XD
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EHUEHEUHUEHEUHEUHUEHEUHEUHEUHUEHUH :3
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Waaah it looks so nice and it's made by traditional way *___*
Soon I will upload my own full manga, hope you will take a look C:
I wish you could do more pages >,<
And thanks for the translate C:
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Thankies XD
Hoo you have a manga
This page was just a test ^^'' Only the scenery was made by ~superu-shounen
I'll try doing more
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Yay, I'm very curious about your manga! Some time ago I'm interested in romances maybe that's the reason x'D
And thank you, I dunno if you watch me but if some pages will appear I'll give you a feedback C:
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Romances are nice XD (but I prefer comedy~)
I think I'll do just one-shots =w=
I'm not watching you.. just give me a feedback then ^^
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Hello! : D
Finally I started submitting my manga, check it out and tell me what do you think, it would help me a lot C:
Um... I hope you didn't forget I was suppose to give you feedback some time ago
And ofc I'm waiting for your story too ewe
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Sure I'll take a look XD
My story will not come ^^' I think I'll be just an illustrator..
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