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Description The characters of Ao no Exorcist are not mine~
Artwork in the preview is not mine.
I got it from: [link]
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Path of a Cool Dude - Chapter 8

Pairing: Renzou x Rin + Everyone x Rin
Multi-chaptered


1st Chapter
2nd Chapter
3rd Chapter
4th Chapter
5th Chapter
6th Chapter
7th Chapter
8th Chapter
9th Chapter
10th Chapter
11th Chapter
12th Chapter

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[If you managed to get through that chunk of weirdness, I applaud you. Because that was probably one of the stupidest chapters I have ever written for a story so far (parts of it)... x'D

Hope you still enjoyed it though and are looking forward for more...! Things are about to get really really messy. Wish I had a beta (I reeeaaally need one for these next few chapters because I feel like there's something wrong with them...).

Anyway, about this chapter: I had a lot of difficulty… didn’t really know what to write so that things made at least some sort of sense to me... so it took forever to write… forever… @___@

But at least it's done now. I can carry on to the next part... the Test-of-Courage~

edit: Oops, caught a spelling error near the end. So I uploaded a new version.]
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Comments: 14

nohappiness [2012-11-27 15:36:52 +0000 UTC]

“I remember my other reason for giving up now.” XDDD Haha, love Shima. C:
The prospect of Yukio actually killing Shima scares me… ;^; And the fact that Bon would welcome that scares me too. XD Shura’s awesome, as always.
Shima’s still a perv and I love how he’s the first to run after Rin, obviously, lol.
Shura, oh you… >w> Shima’s got quite the active imagination haha.
“Shut up… My brother’s virginity could be in danger.” Priceless. XDDD
A confused Rin is always adorable. OuO And lolz, the other guys must feel sucky since Yukio is already close to Rin and has an advantage, lolz.
When Shima wanted Rin to look at his body I couldn’t help but think he was trying to hard haha XD, still cute though. He’s so conceited about his body haha XD. Rin you’re so darling. OuO
“Hell yeah, I just went there. Take that, you bastards..!” Brilliant!! XD
I agree with Shima, Rin’s an angel. >u<
When Rin held up the red panties I somehow suspected Shura… >3> Oh, she’s clever… Yes, very good.
Loved when Rin flashed Konekomaru. XD
>x<

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wolfboy305 [2011-12-17 02:13:13 +0000 UTC]

MOAR!!!!

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leiyoi In reply to wolfboy305 [2011-12-22 06:23:32 +0000 UTC]

x'D
R-Right, updating now~
( Don't hit me...! > x <;; )

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wolfboy305 In reply to leiyoi [2011-12-22 08:16:02 +0000 UTC]

~wears a mafia outfit with hat smoking a cigar and talks in an accent~good good but you better not betray me or~whistles and a bunch animals come out of no where~i'll feed you to my pets

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ObsidianXRogue [2011-12-06 00:36:53 +0000 UTC]

.............................
I have found happiness!
Fanfiction.net doesn't have much of this pairing.
I love freaking everything about this. I read all of the chapters last night. I really love how things are moving along. I hope this is one of those fics that go's on.. Forever
Can't wait for an update!

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leiyoi In reply to ObsidianXRogue [2011-12-06 11:18:39 +0000 UTC]

I know, riiiight?? > <
I keep visiting Fanfiction.net to see if any new stories are uploaded for them but I never see any...!
Gaaah, it's so unsatisfying!
...that's why I had to write my own instead. T v T
(I reread my chapters over and over and over... ha ha ha...
it's fun but also painful because I'm constantly editing and re-editing things in my mind...)

Lol~ Thank you so much for your comment. I always love reading comments and I read 'em over and over again. x'D
They're very encouraging!
And I'm glad that you're enjoying it so much and that it moves along well for you (yay, success~).
As for writing this story forever... haha, I don't have enough brain power to keep it up for that long.
(Like, 30+ chapters...? Holy crap--I can't do that?! ||orz)

I think that this story will likely end around chapter 15 or 16...? Which puts this as... one of the longest stories I will have ever written. Wow. O v O;;

But once I finish this one, I already have ideas for other stories.
So when winter recession comes around, I can finally get to churning them out~~
Gyahahaha, I can't wait to release my RenRin obsessed brain~!
Just hope I can last through finals week though... heh.
G-Go me...! ...yeh~ = v = b

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ObsidianXRogue In reply to leiyoi [2011-12-06 21:31:57 +0000 UTC]

I Love long comments!
If you ever upload this to fanfiction.net Let me know so I can save and view them on my itouch. Reading cute stories makes the time fly by for me! I tried just copying the text and saving it on my itouch and it wouldn't work! I have one of the text archivers on my Itouch filled with fanfic goodness.
All good things come to an end eventually!
I think that once you get past a certain point it drags on and it just seems forced. This story just seems to have that flow.
Others stories? Yes Please!
Going through College English 1101. I am not amused.
This will be one of those fics that I just read non stop. The chapters are long enough that I seem to forget what I read once I finished a few more chapters. Call it a blessing and a curse.
I just finished reading it for the third time.

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leiyoi In reply to ObsidianXRogue [2011-12-11 17:22:43 +0000 UTC]

T-Three times through...?!!! O__O
Wow... thank you so much!! I'm so glad that you like it that much...! T v T
I hope that you'll enjoy the next chapters, too... ha ha~
I'm on Chapter 12 now. But because the chapters beforehand all end on places that are kind of 'cliff-hanger' like, it will be unsatisfying to read them (I want to put them up all together, hmm... or maybe spaced a day apart or something). Chapter 12 is where things finally end on a good note and then we can go on back to school...

About getting them on your itouch, would you like me to send you the Word Documents instead? If you give me an e-mail address then I can send 'em over. = v = b

Also, I am author who actually loves writing AUs. So all the future stories will likely be AUs. Do you mind that they'll be AUs? Hmm, I do want to write a story where Rin is a girl though... so that would take place in their verse... Oh, I also wanted to write a story where Rin, Yukio, and the Kyoto trio met each other as kids. I saw a cute comic of that so I'd like to write a story of it, haha~ So, those are two stories that takes place in their universe...

But the other ideas I have will be AUs... like, the Shima brothers are a popular band, Yukio is their manager, and Rin is trying to become a professional dancer. Something like that... Shiro is alive in this story and I'm not too sure what to do with the other characters yet. Yeah... but it's kind of like that. Plus, even though Rin says he's a dancer (and he does practice hard), he's actually slaying monsters/demons behind the scenes... o 3 o;;
It's gonna be cool. = v = b

Another story will be about the ocean (because I am a marine science major so... there's a lot of things people need to know about protecting our oceans and the marine animals, haha...) Yep, so I'm still deciding if I want Rin as a merperson yet but... he'll definitely be trying to do something to protect the sea. O:

I also want to write a story where Rin and Renzou are either each kings/princes of two nations (one nation is known to be full of corruption while the other is like paradise on Earth). Either that or they can be a demon and angel. I just want to write a story like that because I just kinda like the idea that Rin will be an 'angel' in a demon's body while Renzou is a 'demon' in an angel's body (ero-demon...) x'D Or like, the nation that is known for being corrupt has a really pure person like Rin as their prince while the nation of paradise has a super perverted person as their prince.
Haha... I really like that paradox that this pairing can have~
Then again, I guess YukioRin kind of has it, too. O:

In any case... any story you'd like for me to start on first~? x'D (After finishing this one)

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ObsidianXRogue In reply to leiyoi [2011-12-11 18:12:18 +0000 UTC]

The kings/princes thing sounds awesome!
I have a love hate relationship with AU's. Some are able to pull it off and other fall somewhat flat. I am sure you will do a fantastic job though! I can't wait!
I finally broke down and bought a PDF saver and saved them from DeviantArt. A lot of work, but well worth it! = v =
I understand the feeling about cliff hangers!
Sometimes a good cliff hanger can get people really into a story and looking forward to another chapter.

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Sakuramiko [2011-12-03 22:28:25 +0000 UTC]

This was really funny. Poor everyone having to compete like that.

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leiyoi In reply to Sakuramiko [2011-12-06 11:23:56 +0000 UTC]

Glad that you found it funny~ x'D
Yeah, this chapter was really crack.
Or at least semi-crack (is what I tend to do~).

Do you know how many times I hand-palmed my face while writing this chapter...? x'DD
Yeah... too many times to count...
o 3 o;;

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Sakuramiko In reply to leiyoi [2011-12-07 00:29:27 +0000 UTC]

Hahaha! Well you did make them be extra silly but in a convincing way.

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Tiramisyuu [2011-12-03 02:18:48 +0000 UTC]

wahaha ! love it <3 MOARRRRR

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leiyoi In reply to Tiramisyuu [2011-12-06 11:21:24 +0000 UTC]

lol... x'D
Always wanting more...~
o 3 o

<3 to you~

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