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Published: 2016-02-08 21:20:41 +0000 UTC; Views: 212; Favourites: 8; Downloads: 0
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just something that came to my mind ^^is everything alright? anatomical correct? how can i make her look even sader?
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To be honest at this stage, I really don't think you can make her look even sadder. You'd done a wonderful job on her expression and her pose - it looks super natural and she really does seem to be completely slumping over in grief.
You could improve on the girl who's just died - in particular the way her arm and right leg rests on the ground. It needs to be more angled, because of the perspective you've drawn this in. I mean, we should be able to see a bit of the sole of her foot there, and we should be looking at her arm more from the side: relax your hand completely, close one eye and look at it from the thumb side.
Hope this helps
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Ah okay, thank you, that's really helping
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