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Published: 2013-06-04 01:39:11 +0000 UTC; Views: 1207; Favourites: 46; Downloads: 4
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Description my signature scrawled across all
of your sentences like a stain of apologies:

i'm sorry for anchoring you to my hip
like a one-sided promise, like a flood of insincerity.

i'm sorry for collecting you like a well of wishes,
for whispering you into every crack in these walls.

i do not have the depth to tether our limbs
with the tautness of our smiles, but i will
balance you on the edges of my knees until
you slip away.

i have been kneeling with my arms outstretched

waiting,

but the divinity of your touch
never graced my expectant stance.

our bones built forest fires together,
but it was always my tears putting them out.
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Comments: 11

Sammur-amat [2013-10-04 20:09:01 +0000 UTC]

there is always such a depth to your words <3

congratulations on the DLD, dearling

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learningtobefree In reply to Sammur-amat [2013-10-04 20:52:19 +0000 UTC]

thank you, thank you!!

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neonsquiggle [2013-08-29 13:18:37 +0000 UTC]

It feels so raw. Wonderful. I love your imagery, and your rhythm.


Keep writing!

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learningtobefree In reply to neonsquiggle [2013-08-29 22:45:28 +0000 UTC]

thank you so much!
that really means a lot

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DailyLitDeviations [2013-07-31 07:48:35 +0000 UTC]

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learningtobefree In reply to DailyLitDeviations [2013-08-03 22:26:45 +0000 UTC]

thank you so much!

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Yuuza [2013-06-14 22:23:16 +0000 UTC]

i loved the last sentence you always have a nice ending to your poems

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learningtobefree In reply to Yuuza [2013-06-15 02:49:28 +0000 UTC]

thanks so much!

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StanxKyleFan [2013-06-07 17:15:54 +0000 UTC]

This was really pretty... It was very visual and I related to it. I hope whatever youre going through gets betters soon. Everything happens for a reason, we just never see it right away.

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learningtobefree In reply to StanxKyleFan [2013-06-08 00:26:35 +0000 UTC]

glad you liked it!

& keep in mind that every writer's work is not autobiographical, but thank you.

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StanxKyleFan In reply to learningtobefree [2013-06-08 03:24:18 +0000 UTC]

That's true, I know. I guess I just assume that a lot of the time because emotion and writing like poetry comes from the heart. Thats the case for me anyway.

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