Loli-Tsundere [2015-12-21 18:50:43 +0000 UTC]
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You did absolutely wonderful creating such an elegant dress. Fabric looks to be perfectly stable, and the golden lining as well as sleeves and lace look to be amazing as well.
Gloves and crown are some nice touch up features, jewel on the dress seems complete, and a wonderful...um.. "Puffiness" for sleeves.
Focusing on how you copied her brawl dress I feel as if certain colors must be a be more brighter if possible. But saying this, I do feel like some parts can be darker as well. The background fits perfectly with the pose, and colors for peach.
Now on to pose, I say that her expression looks a bit... blank. Not saying it needs to be more done on, I will just say that maybe taken at a different angle would have been acceptable.
I didn't put much into originality because it seems like this idea has been used before, but this one has been a perfect example if anyone wanted to try and create their own with a model. I loved how you based it on one of her smash bros. attacks though, genius idea. Vision is very well done, and a perfect for impact. Technique seems to line up with it, but I'm a bit picky about stable ground.
in other words, I hope to see more of these poses if ever decided. Fantastic job.
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