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LaVioletta — Bentu's Ruins

Published: 2011-08-11 04:12:23 +0000 UTC; Views: 2010; Favourites: 29; Downloads: 37
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Description Two transports and a shuttle landed in the bright, warm meadow around two kilometers from the Rebel stronghold known as Bentu Base. Reconnaissance had shown the base to be at the best, crewed by the bare minimum of personnel. What the Imperials found after the march was exactly what their leaders had feared.

"Sir," said stormtrooper RL-4023. "Computer records have all been destroyed." His report came after the bulk of the forces had spread out, finding room after room, complex after complex devoid of Rebel forces and technicians.

"I should have known," Lon Revecc said with annoyance. "Recall the troops. There's nothing here." He stood, hands on his waist, looking around the command center, then down at part of a dismantled com-scan unit. Kicking it idly as he thought, the General turned and pointed to the floor. A black-uniformed young officer rushed over and placed a holoprojector. Kneeling over it, Revecc keyed in Commodore Altori's channel and waited for her image to appear.

"General Revecc, I trust you have good news?" she asked, anticipation coloring her voice.

"I do not," he replied, trying not to sound disrespectful to his naval counterpart through his supreme anger. "The Rebels have flown! They haven't been here for days."

"I see," Altori said thoughtfully, shifting her weight. "Is there anything of use?"

"Not a thing. Whoever their commander is, he's good," Revecc told her. The tone of his voice made the woman's holographic eyebrow raise.

"Lon, do I detect a hint of respect?"

"You may indeed," he responded as he stood. "It's been a long time since anyone has gotten clean out from under me. I intend for it to be the last, though. Revecc out." He tapped the little control with the side of his boot just as Altori's image took a lazily familiar move into something resembling attention for a polite salute.

"Sir," said the red-shouldered Stormtrooper. "The Rebels had to have left something."

"You'd think that," Revecc told him as the three of them strode out of the command center. "But this Rebel, whoever he is… No, he wouldn't do that, unless…"

"Unless what, sir?"

"Unless he thinks like me, commander," Revecc said with renewed vigor. Snapping his fingers, he pointed ahead. "Have your men converge on the staging area. I have a notion of how to determine where they haven't gone."


Part 1: Continue the Evacuation
Part 2: Sizing the Opposition
Part 3 of the ongoing story
Part 4: Dodgers, Scramble!
Part 5: A Hand Offered
Part 6: That Funny Feeling
Part 7: Smack into Trouble
Part 8: The Accord of Bomura
Part 9: Aggressive Diversion

Art © 2011 La Violetta
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Star Wars © LucasFilm LTD.
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Comments: 21

overlordofkings [2012-03-06 06:04:42 +0000 UTC]

I really like this pic. You got the poses nailed down and Jamie's story was good....not to mention it had Storm Troopers standing at attention, which is always badass

Awesome work

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LaVioletta In reply to overlordofkings [2012-03-08 10:38:56 +0000 UTC]

At some point soon I really should draw stormtroopers in action. The armor isn't quite as daunting as I'd expected, and the more I do it the better I'll get at it.

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TheHeroSFDeserves [2011-08-18 19:48:41 +0000 UTC]

You'll be a great comic artist someday, because you'll even invest a deviation's worth of work into the panels that don't make people drool/blush/giggle/cheer, but rather the ones that those panels will depend on to tell the story.

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LaVioletta In reply to TheHeroSFDeserves [2011-08-18 20:44:11 +0000 UTC]

It's hearing things like that that really keep me going. For me, it's always been about the story. That's the truly important part, and I don't want to slouch on it just because it's not always in the middle of some action.

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TheHeroSFDeserves In reply to LaVioletta [2011-08-18 20:54:58 +0000 UTC]

Well you seemed a little disheartened in that journal and by the fact that I enjoyed your last "happy" image, so i thought you should be reminded that you's a boss. Concern for the story is what distinguishes amateurs from amateurs with talent. You and your boyfriend do some killer work I like this guy's dissatisfaction with how things have turned out. Ha! Take that, you smug empirical bastuhd

So smile!!! Or i'll invite the renaissance fair to your house. Apparently sneaky italian merchants are good with that stuff

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Morfe22 [2011-08-11 22:49:53 +0000 UTC]

I love this. A particularly nice job with the hologram effect

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LaVioletta In reply to Morfe22 [2011-08-11 23:13:39 +0000 UTC]

Oh, and that was a fun effect to figure out, too. Thanks much, amico.

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rajee [2011-08-11 13:32:21 +0000 UTC]

Great job.

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LaVioletta In reply to rajee [2011-08-11 23:13:17 +0000 UTC]

Eh, thanks.

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rajee In reply to LaVioletta [2011-08-12 14:28:16 +0000 UTC]

Your welcome.

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RiseofDarkFire [2011-08-11 12:32:02 +0000 UTC]

The suspense!

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LaVioletta In reply to RiseofDarkFire [2011-08-11 23:13:09 +0000 UTC]

Hopefully it won't take months to get the story moving forward.

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RiseofDarkFire In reply to LaVioletta [2011-08-12 16:00:25 +0000 UTC]

Good luck!

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DarkArts33 [2011-08-11 05:19:34 +0000 UTC]

I love the way you draw storm troopers, I have never been able to draw them right

Awesome work!!

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LaVioletta In reply to DarkArts33 [2011-08-11 23:12:54 +0000 UTC]

They weren't easy, that's for sure. I'm relieved they turned out as well as they did.

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DarkArts33 In reply to LaVioletta [2011-08-13 03:40:53 +0000 UTC]

they turned out awesome

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SportsLunatic [2011-08-11 04:21:24 +0000 UTC]

Very cool pic! This fits perfectly with his story! Awesome job!

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LaVioletta In reply to SportsLunatic [2011-08-11 23:11:56 +0000 UTC]

Grazie mille! He really pores over the artwork to get the narration right.

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TheInnerJamie [2011-08-11 04:17:27 +0000 UTC]

Let's go stormtrooping. Everybody's stormtrooping now. Come on and stormtroop with me.

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LaVioletta In reply to TheInnerJamie [2011-08-11 23:11:35 +0000 UTC]

Sounds like a fun night! Well, until a rebel with a blaster shows up...

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SportsLunatic In reply to TheInnerJamie [2011-08-11 04:22:11 +0000 UTC]

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