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Kurrpip [2017-04-21 23:32:15 +0000 UTC]
This came from a dream?! You have more interesting dreams than me!
This is so cool, everything is very well thought even though it's just a beginning of a plot. All the classes thing, the way every of them live, the mystery about the cleric class, the powers of the reapers, this is all interesting! I really like the design of the two characters (even though it's not really clear that Aeron is wearing a mask). And the new/old reaper thing is a cool idea.
I would really like to know what is their story!!
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LadyUnorthodox In reply to Kurrpip [2017-04-22 13:03:52 +0000 UTC]
I tend to have very...detailed dreams. A lot of my plots come from them, actually xD
Thank you so much! They were a lot of fun to design, and I'm excited to work more on their world~ x3 I don't know exactly where I'm going with the whole thing...but hopefully it'll be interesting xD
Yeah I can see how Aeron's mask may look like simply face paint or something. You have any suggestions on how it can made more obvious? I'm always open to suggestions!
It's so nice to have someone be interested in the story behind the characters! So few people seem to be, it would seem. At least on the whole. Getting feedback on it is wonderful! Makes me want to do things with it more often! So thank you!
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Kurrpip In reply to LadyUnorthodox [2017-04-23 13:12:57 +0000 UTC]
You're welcome ^w^ I've read lots of stories on DA and I think yours are really worth being told :3 So don't stop!
For the mask, you could increase the difference of color between the skin and the mask. Like, make Aeron's skin a little darker. Or you could draw the strings holding the mask to his head. Or just let it like this and say that their mask look almost like it's their face.
Also, I was wondering, are the people from the working class human? Or other?
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LadyUnorthodox In reply to Kurrpip [2017-04-24 20:10:49 +0000 UTC]
Oh wow! Thanks so much!!!
I'll consider those options, thanks! x3
Like...as opposed to anthro? I'll be honest, I have no idea if my characters are animals in my actual stories or not. I actually go out of my way to not mention it one way of the other in my writings b/c I have yet to decide. xD
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Kurrpip In reply to LadyUnorthodox [2017-04-24 23:04:12 +0000 UTC]
Well, Aeron is definitely not human, so I was wondering if the other were the same specie as him
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LadyUnorthodox In reply to Kurrpip [2017-04-24 23:19:19 +0000 UTC]
Oh!
I'm not honestly sure yet. If you have a suggestion as to what you think would work well, I'm all ears~
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Kurrpip In reply to LadyUnorthodox [2017-04-24 23:55:35 +0000 UTC]
Ah, I don't know... I don't see them as humans, though. But not the same as the reapers, like something considered inferior?
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LadyUnorthodox In reply to Kurrpip [2017-04-25 22:23:54 +0000 UTC]
Oh I can totally see that! I'll play around with it. Thank you for the input!
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Axel-Angel982 [2017-04-21 16:42:15 +0000 UTC]
Such a unique plot, I really like the concept. And Marduk seems precious~
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LadyUnorthodox In reply to Axel-Angel982 [2017-04-21 16:56:44 +0000 UTC]
Thank you! You're too kind!
Yeah he's super strange and precious with his bird movements and his little sounds xD
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Axel-Angel982 In reply to LadyUnorthodox [2017-04-21 17:09:45 +0000 UTC]
Adorable. Hey, if you ever make some huge story out of this I would love to read it.
Actually I love to even help write it... if I was better at doing so.
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LadyUnorthodox In reply to Axel-Angel982 [2017-04-21 21:06:33 +0000 UTC]
I'm hoping to, actually! Along with all of my other huge stories xD
Don't say that! I read a few of your works and I thought they were very well written! x3
It also looks like you really like Pokemon! I am actually creating an RP for a Pokemon region I've named Desian, if you're ever interested! It involves using Sun and Moon~
Pokemon Version PrismPokemon Version Prism is my fan-made region and is playable on White, Black, White 2, Black 2, X, Y, AS, OR, and Sun and Moon currently. Other games will be added as I'm able to clone and perfect Pokemon.
It is an RPG game, which will be played using a Discord server. It has loose scripted events that you can navigate through anyway you want, different modes of play, original and headcanon characters to interact with, and even special prizes to be won! This journal will be updated on any news concerning Version Prism. The skin I was originally using stopped working? So I had to switch skins there. Meh.
Poke'mon Version Prism is now available for Sun and Moon!
Using Dreamself.me, I created many of the characters you will see throughout Desian that are not canon to the Pokemon universe! If you want to see them, click here!
ATTENTION BETA TESTERS!
Beta testing is nearly over (relatively speaking.)!
Those who have yet to participat
So if you're ever interested give it a look~
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Axel-Angel982 In reply to LadyUnorthodox [2017-04-22 17:31:51 +0000 UTC]
Awesome, I'll be keeping an eye out for it then.
Oh really? Thank you very much then; I sometimes worry that they aren't good enough.
Oh I think I heard of your region before, yeah.
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Auditty [2017-04-21 13:56:52 +0000 UTC]
Both of them are super adorable x3 I love how different the two Reaper classes are...yet they both wear masks of sorts to hide their identity, thus identifying them as Reapers~
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LadyUnorthodox In reply to Auditty [2017-04-21 16:59:41 +0000 UTC]
Thank you, hun! You're so sweet <3
Yeah their masks are the only thing that link them together, it seems. I was going to have them both wear dark colors, but Aeron just looked better in lighter tones to me. xD
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SteakBitr2 [2017-04-21 01:22:09 +0000 UTC]
Gosh, this is such an intriguing and well-thought-out concept! And I loooove the character designs, especially Marduk's.
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LadyUnorthodox In reply to SteakBitr2 [2017-04-21 05:01:27 +0000 UTC]
o3o Oh thank you! It was an odd dream, but I think I can make it into something neat~
Marduk looks...oddly cute to me xD Like he's studying Aeron's arm in interest xD
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SteakBitr2 In reply to LadyUnorthodox [2017-04-21 13:14:20 +0000 UTC]
You're most welcome! That does sound like an odd dream, but you certainly turned it into a fascinating idea!
To be honest, I think Marduk's pretty adorable too. He seems to have that bird-like shyness and curiosity about him. I find it absolutely precious that he likes children so much~ He actually reminds me of a crow we've got at our zoo, to a degree.
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LadyUnorthodox In reply to SteakBitr2 [2017-04-21 17:06:14 +0000 UTC]
Oh jeeze! You're too much x3
That crow sounds ADORABLE. I love crows. They're so smart and curious~
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SteakBitr2 In reply to LadyUnorthodox [2017-04-22 03:23:13 +0000 UTC]
Crows are amazing, aren't they? I wish I could spend more time with them. They've got a unique beauty about them, and like you said, they're so smart!
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LadyUnorthodox In reply to SteakBitr2 [2017-04-22 13:16:28 +0000 UTC]
They get such a bad reputation and it makes me sad...they're so intuitive! Some are smarter than human children! It just...I love crows x3 They are beautiful aren't they? They're just so striking against the day time sky...it's lovely~
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SteakBitr2 In reply to LadyUnorthodox [2017-04-23 18:35:01 +0000 UTC]
I know exactly what you mean. I love how in some lights they're inky black, but in others, you can see their iridescent feathers! And the way they use tools and such is super cool.
It's pretty disappointing when such lovely creatures get a bad reputation, like you said; I deal with that a lot when it comes to snakes. At least there will always be people who appreciate them.
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MamaWhiskers [2017-04-20 21:38:10 +0000 UTC]
Aaaahhh these ideas and the babies are so beautiful stop it you!
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TheWiseGuy01 [2017-04-20 21:36:59 +0000 UTC]
awesome!
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vladimirsangel [2017-04-20 21:22:34 +0000 UTC]
Ahh these are so cool! I love the development of the concept.
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