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LeeNTien [2017-03-29 20:42:33 +0000 UTC]
Touching story, and well presented, as usual.
However two words seem to be out of place there - "sacrificed" and "memorize".
The 1st one implies some sort of deliberate decision, as in "let's get him killed, on purpose".
And the 2nd means trying to commit something to memory - as in memorize (learn) a poem.
I'm not sure what better words would be for the first case there... at least in what Leo says. I struggle to find a replacement word without changing the entire sentence or even the meaning.
In the newspaper could be "gave his life", probably.
As for the second - it's "remember" =]
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Skriff [2016-05-29 08:58:06 +0000 UTC]
The tears are burning my eyes. Thank you. ;_;
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BoneyBackRivers [2016-05-25 14:37:03 +0000 UTC]
once again...Beautiful.
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CookieCrafter00 [2016-05-16 11:19:43 +0000 UTC]
This *sniffle* was *sniffes* the cutest and *sniffles* and saddest thing ever!! ;-;
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TheWeatherAlligator [2016-05-15 13:22:28 +0000 UTC]
Very beautiful, very good.
A side from that, this world needs Kenshiro
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Darrkru [2016-05-15 04:41:52 +0000 UTC]
Damn these onion ninjas!!!
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Jonny09 [2016-05-15 02:31:29 +0000 UTC]
*sniff* oh the feels *sniff*
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GoldenTar [2016-05-14 19:29:48 +0000 UTC]
Ah, it's so beautiful, and it squeezed some tears, thank you ♥
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