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KyasurinBerri — Dragon Ash
Published: 2013-04-26 08:11:35 +0000 UTC; Views: 138; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 0
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Description Trinkets trash and dragon ash
Hold up these walls, the tombs, and halls
The goblins underground and their drums begin to sound
Helmets of soldiers strong are soon prophesised to fall
Heads roll upon the ground below turrets broken but round
Fire and ice kiss the life which grows green and rich
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xzye [2013-04-26 08:15:51 +0000 UTC]

free verse is my least favourite form of poetry, yet I like this one. the verses go fairly well, as if you did half free verse and half iambic parameter... overall 8/10, good job ^^

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KyasurinBerri In reply to xzye [2013-04-26 08:21:00 +0000 UTC]

Thank you very much.

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