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SuperRAP [2018-10-17 12:19:45 +0000 UTC]
Such a cute flirt. Kiss me, Kara.
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Aden2002 [2017-08-01 17:30:33 +0000 UTC]
The expression is adorable -- I think the big eyes were a nice idea!
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Tears-of-Xion [2017-07-28 16:29:25 +0000 UTC]
Hey, I'm here from ProjectComment .
First off, I really love this! She is so pretty, and the shading style really looks great! The fact that you're colorblind makes this even better, as it shows that you had to put a lot more effort into making it look right.
There are a couple of flaws that I can see, however. Mostly, The problem I have is with the positioning of the character. Her neck seems oddly tilted, and it almost looks slightly unnatural. It gives me a bit of a neck cramp just looking at it, but I actually don't believe that the flaw is in the neck itself, but rather in the positioning of the shoulders. However, the shoulder placement is odd because the arm placement is odd. Both arms look really stiff and oddly positioned. Stand in front of a mirror and try to strike this pose, and see exactly how uncomfortable it feels. It looks like you were attempted to make it look like she was walking, but the arm would not be that tucked behind the body in that case; instead, it would be farther away from it. I'm honestly not sure what the other arm is doing, but in any case, both arms look out of place and give the picture an odd, stiff feeling. You might want to look up some references on how arms and shoulders are positioned in such poses, or try using a mirror to use yourself as a reference.
The second issue I have is actually with the shading. While this is great shading, and I love it, I feel like it could of used a couple of of deeper shadows. Namely, a shade of darker blue along the side of the body without the lighting, a darker shade of red for the bottom of the cape, a slightly darker shading for the neck underneath the jawline, and then perhaps some general darker shadows for the hair, to give it a more 3D feel. However, this is just an idea, and while it might add an extra layer of depth to the image, this particular picture still looks pretty great the way it is.
All in all, I love this picture. It needs work, yes, but it is still great! I especially love the little cities in the back; for some reason that looks really amazing. I hope that my comment was helpful, and that you'll continue to make great artwork!
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kmkibble75 In reply to Tears-of-Xion [2017-07-28 22:27:17 +0000 UTC]
Hi! Thank you so much for taking the time to comment -- I really appreciate it!
I'll try to keep the shading idea in mind in the future -- I'm actually going to experiment with some greyscale work this weekend to see how that turns out. But at the moment, even when I try to be bolder with my shadows, I tend to pull up short of where I should be. I'll keep trying to stretch myself, though.
As far as her pose goes, it may be my fault for not really conveying her pose -- she's supposed to be leaning backward a bit, resting on her arms off to the side and coyly looking up at the 'camera'. I tried to have a few building rooftops in the background so it was clear you were looking down somewhat, rather than straight on, but they just didn't work out at all. (I'd provide a link to the original image I used as inspiration, but it's nsfw).
That said, I should be able to convey the ideas I have without needing to explain them, so I have to get better at that.
Thank you, again!
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Tears-of-Xion In reply to kmkibble75 [2017-07-29 17:50:01 +0000 UTC]
^^ Greyscale is a great way to practice drawing shadows, that's for sure.
Hmm...I can sort of see what you are talking about, but the way that the 'camera' is angled doesn't really give off that impression at all. xD It's not bad, but you might want to practice foreshortening. I'm sure you'll get better with practice, though. :3
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Cheli-arte-cr [2017-07-26 17:15:41 +0000 UTC]
Hello! I want to say this is amazing. And you're colorblind!? Oh my god, you must be so talented!
I guess there could be more shading, but don't worry, I understand it must be really hard to be colorblind.
Maybe you could've made some hair streaks, it would give it a really cool effect!
Her right arm is a bit distorted, though. Like, the diamond shape gives it a queer shape. Also I feel like her arms are a bit too thin.
The background nice as well! The ocean's beautiful.
Apart from that, everything's awesome! Nice job, this is definitely a masterpiece!
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kmkibble75 In reply to Cheli-arte-cr [2017-07-27 21:49:05 +0000 UTC]
Thank you for taking the time to comment, and for the very kind compliments.
The amount of shading is definitely something that has always hindered me -- at a certain point, the colors begin to look like something different to me (like her flesh tones will at some point just look orange to me) even if they look okay to someone else, so I'm always hesitant to push the envelope very much, even if I should. That's kind of frustrating.
You're right about the diamond shape of her arm -- I'm not even sure why I left it that sharp. I'll chalk it up to the comic book style I usually aim for for now, but it's something I'll keep an eye on in the future.
Thank you, again!
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Cheli-arte-cr In reply to kmkibble75 [2017-07-28 19:20:10 +0000 UTC]
My pleasure!
Right now I'm afraid I'm using my phone to chat and it's really hard to type without errors, so I'm trying to not write much, sorry.
But Your Welcome, again!
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kmkibble75 In reply to Majorflaw [2017-07-29 23:38:16 +0000 UTC]
I tried out the multiply technique on one of my older drawings -- I think I like it. I'll have to experiment further in the future...
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kmkibble75 In reply to Majorflaw [2017-07-26 13:07:41 +0000 UTC]
Thank you for taking the time to comment, and for providing the tutorial links -- the greyscale trick sounds interesting. I'll definitely play around with that a bit to see what I can do with it.
I also have to get a hang of varying lineweights... I seem to keep missing out on that despite trying to do it. I think my brain has a hard time wrapping itself around the idea of not being consistent.
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Majorflaw In reply to kmkibble75 [2017-07-26 13:41:40 +0000 UTC]
hehe yea go at your own pace ^^
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PowerOfTheBeard22 [2017-07-26 02:53:39 +0000 UTC]
I really like it. Looks great
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SonSilvShad18 In reply to kmkibble75 [2017-07-26 04:05:11 +0000 UTC]
You're welcome, I'm also watching her series.
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The-Dream-Dojo [2017-07-25 23:37:51 +0000 UTC]
She looks very cute! ^w^ Though, I think the bottom part of the 'S' on her emblem should be fully connected to left border.
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kmkibble75 In reply to The-Dream-Dojo [2017-07-26 03:54:00 +0000 UTC]
Thank you! And in some costumes the S does connect, but in her most recent Rebirth one, which I based this on (at least color-wise), it doesn't. (tinyurl.com/y8kqxewr )
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ApplePieOG [2017-07-25 09:57:11 +0000 UTC]
Very cute!
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NymphTale [2017-07-25 08:47:09 +0000 UTC]
Cuuuute~
Really love how the sun falls on her. Shape and value of it looks really nice and natural!
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kmkibble75 In reply to NymphTale [2017-07-25 23:19:07 +0000 UTC]
Thanks! I felt like I was taking a bit of a gamble on that at times, so I'm glad it turned out alright.
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nightwing70 [2017-07-25 06:11:41 +0000 UTC]
So cute
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DeadEndSeries [2017-07-25 01:40:11 +0000 UTC]
I got pretty damn excited when I saw this in my notifications this morning, I'm not gonna lie. Ever since I saw your Barb and Kara piece a while back I'd been hyped for you to draw her again. (I'm not sure if you were intentionally aiming for a certain version but she looks hardcore earth-two version here, which is my fave besides 38)
I'm one of those few people that read the comics and still shamelessly enjoys the CW show. (Melissa Benoist is wife material) and this really brings back some OG nostalgia from my more in-depth comic book days. The eyes are fantastic, which is wholly integral to her entire look (because we all know kryptonians are at least 50% pretty eyes, 20% shoulders and 30% magnificent hair) and I think you've superbly demonstrated this ratio here, she's stunning.
The only thing I could suggest for improvement would be the addition of some more detailed lines in the hair and suit, but on the other hand, if you added lines to her hair it might look a little less soft and majestic than what you've managed to depict here, and the earth-two supersuit was a pretty basic spandex-looking material so I suppose all selections were called for.
As for the background I really enjoy the whole rooftop overlooking the bay idea. It's (as the person above me said) ambitious and it gives us a break from the constant fan adaptions of national city default backdrops.
Fantastic work, Kevin.
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knives4cash [2017-07-24 23:50:59 +0000 UTC]
How ambitious! I like it!
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