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Published: 2015-12-31 21:46:40 +0000 UTC; Views: 6324; Favourites: 381; Downloads: 5
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Since this is the first page the impact is not very 'impacting' though it creates an aura of mystery, not exactly impacting. Though I see a very well thought out story in the making. A long journey and quest is what I see, I followed your tumblr and saw these strange sketches and I'm glad to see them come to life. Since this is the first page, I have nothing to really go on. Style and appearance wise, it's superb the colors blend together nicely and the scenery is profound. The dynamic and subtle ways of your imagery really shows. Though going back to the mystery aspect. It keeps my interest because obviously."Who is this antler person?","Who is this woman?","WHY IS THERE A DEAD BODY AND IS EITHER AND OR RESPONSIBLE!?"
Stuff like that. You creating a great basis of a world with the winter forest aspect and I hope to see more of this series and I hopes my critique helps in anyways.
Kollab- Signing out.
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Wow Kiwa.. The art is just.. Breathtaking, since I see no error to me, I shall not critique, only congratulate you in the wonderful art work. Even the landscape looks amazing. Good job there.
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pekne naozaj teším sa na pokračovanie vyzera to zaujímavo 
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This looks like a very promising comic. *bookmarks it*
The panels all look like anime screenshots! 
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very very nice! I love the concept!
maybe you should let someone proof read before posting though ^^
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Why? Is there something wrong with the text?
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yeah, not in this page, but some on Tapastic
like "...How many time do I have to tell you" plural "times"
"You I don't enjoy doing this." misses two words "You know that I don't enjoy doing this."
but I see english isn't your mother tongue, so they are easy mistakes to overlook
and I'm not trying to be a jerk, I just want to help. I know how offended people can get when you try to correct something
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Ah, I can't believe i uploaded the unedited version D: thank you for pointing it out <3
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the amount of detail is very impressive!
I really look forward to this comic c:
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