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kitt3702 In reply to sereza0512 [2011-08-06 16:32:14 +0000 UTC]

thanks UuU
yes i do :'D
u?

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sereza0512 In reply to kitt3702 [2011-08-06 23:59:45 +0000 UTC]

yes i have diamiand black platiunum and gold

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kitt3702 In reply to sereza0512 [2011-08-07 19:47:05 +0000 UTC]

I HAVE THE SAME EXACT FOUR GAMES XD
(along with some ranger and PMD games but yeah)

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sereza0512 In reply to kitt3702 [2011-08-14 02:35:19 +0000 UTC]

me to

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kitt3702 In reply to Mireyrr [2010-08-26 21:10:24 +0000 UTC]

Sure, critique away :3

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Mireyrr In reply to kitt3702 [2010-08-26 21:21:50 +0000 UTC]

Okie-Dokie. ^^

There are only a few parts that really bugged me about this and I'll list 'em below. Blue are good parts that stick out and red are parts to improve.
The lighting is REALLY awesome and gives it a definite shape
I LOVE the head for all of it's definition and care
I love the scruff, but it's all focused on the front areas
It reminds me of a Corgi with it's big ears and long body
The curves where the ribs end and the top is may be a little drastic because how large the head/legs are to the main part
The white under-fur should have a slightly more drastic curl on the left side since she/he's turning her/his body
This okay?

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kitt3702 In reply to Mireyrr [2010-08-26 21:44:58 +0000 UTC]

thanx for all the blue bullets ^^
as for the red bullets.
--I see what you mean, but I was looking at an old pic from when the 1st generation handbook came out. According to this picture its ears are very big. I also downsized the head to make it less chibi, so that made the body look longer. Though perhaps I made it a tad too long.
--I completely agree about the ribs. Now that you point it out, I see that i messed up there.
--I also see what you mean about the white fur.

thanx for the critigue ^^

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Mireyrr In reply to kitt3702 [2010-08-27 00:05:34 +0000 UTC]

No problem ^^
*Yeah, it's probably thee length that is setting me off so much.
No problem, you're an awesome artist, everyone just needs someone to help them out.

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kitt3702 In reply to Mireyrr [2010-08-29 02:18:29 +0000 UTC]

^^
Feel free to critique anything I make. If I don't take advice, how will I ever improve? (Especially since you're a perfectionist. lol)
Of course, I will probably argue a few points, but if I see what you mean, I will acknowledge it. ^^

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Mireyrr In reply to kitt3702 [2010-08-29 02:50:15 +0000 UTC]

Okay, I'll do so when I feel I need to. (Yeah, it's a pain sometimes ). You have the right to argue points, free will and all that shiz, you know I only tell others things if they're getting OVERLY confident or something pops out ^^ (Don't worry, I usually critique you when something pops out not the other way XD)

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kitt3702 In reply to Mireyrr [2010-08-29 03:10:20 +0000 UTC]

Yeah, I wouldn't ask u to critique everything I submit. That would be a pain. Just whatever you see that needs major fixing.
Thanks ^^

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Mireyrr In reply to kitt3702 [2010-08-29 03:32:39 +0000 UTC]

Okay, no problem ^^

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kitt3702 In reply to vampiricnights [2010-08-26 21:10:32 +0000 UTC]

thanx ^^

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kitt3702 In reply to BunnybeIIe [2010-08-26 21:05:46 +0000 UTC]

XD
the complete opposite of Yamaia

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BunnybeIIe In reply to kitt3702 [2010-08-26 23:05:45 +0000 UTC]

Lolyes XD

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