cevhertaha95 [2014-07-16 19:33:11 +0000 UTC]
Wow! It makes me feel that Miku is preparing for her live performance with Elsa from Frozen.
I can imagine it right now; Miku's singing Japanese and Elsa is singing English!
Let it go, let it go!
それをもう我慢できない!
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Tamorii [2012-02-24 16:03:44 +0000 UTC]
Hello there, here is your critique from #CritiCentrum !
Negatives
- Her upper body is too long, and her left leg is quite some thicker than her right.
- The shape of the arms is a little odd, and I see you've drawn a horizontal line at her arm. When an arm is streched, you better draw a vertical line to show the form of the elbow there
- Both the hands look a little odd too. Fingers, except for the thumb, excist from 3 parts, but the way the fingers you've drawn bent they seem to only have 2 part. Also I don't see any lines to show the knuckles at her for-us left hand, and the thumb is too long. I suggest you use your own hand as example, after you've done this a few times you get the hang better of the exact shapes and structure of hands. The hands aren't bad, they just could have been done better
- These are just some details, and there aren't minor errors. I just noticed a few small things, and I thinky uo could improve your drawings' their look just by putting some more time in these. For example, both her cubes in her hair are drawn from the same side, while the one at the right should be the mirrored version from the left one. And at the part by her shoulders of her clothes, the left has a lot more lace then the right. Also the whole drawing could use some more folds in the clothes and darker and more shades. Now it's just.. a little flat. A bit of flat colors and not so many details or folds, and this may make it look a little boring. Please try to add some details in the drawing and/or coloration to make eye candy!
Positives
- The coloration of the hair is just.. just wow *A* Lovely shades and highlights, it really has a sort of icy feeling over it!
- The background looks cute, pretty, and really fits the Snow Miku design!
- Also great use of snowflake-textures
The positive-part might look a little small now, but this is only because I had to explain a lot in the negative part. Don't worry, you did a good job, but please experiment with extreme stuff: Extreme poses, angles, coloration, backgrouns, details- you name it! It's a bit simple now Though cute and pretty
I hope this critique helps, and that I wasn't too hard on you! Thank you for submitting to
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lifegiving [2012-02-20 18:35:42 +0000 UTC]
Aight , Hatsune Miku in winter style xD , de kleur enzo maken haar echt winter achtig, Echt leuk ! ^^
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