teenyxtinyxtina [2009-07-26 22:38:43 +0000 UTC]
This sounds so good when you're reading it outloud. It's just one big run on sentence that trips up on itself on some places. It reads more like a poem than apiece of prose. It feels like you should be breaking them up into their own lines.
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Crack-Montage [2008-12-06 00:01:46 +0000 UTC]
"those ribs like lyric talking fingers reaching for the keys are far too apparent."