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KeroseneCanine β€” 'What did they do to you?'

Published: 2012-02-08 01:14:54 +0000 UTC; Views: 2104; Favourites: 39; Downloads: 2
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Description Edit: Guh, everythime I look at this, I think of how much I draw Marlene like I draw Ginger.

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With Private's flippers bandaged, He sat quietly outside Marlene's home, staring blankly at the water. Marlene couldn't hold back on a nagging question any longer. "Did the others do anything to you?"
Private shook his head. "Then why don't you want to go back there?" Marlene perused. Private frowned. I just can't.
It was getting harder and harder not to cry. Private's thoughts were overwhelming him. He folded his sore flippers in his lap, shutting his eyes. He wasn't able to stop a few tears that ran down his beak. Marlene was startled by this, and gingerly put a paw on his shoulder. Private wiped his eyes, but the tears did not stop.
It's all my fault, he thought bitterly. It must be!
Marlene was further startled, but tried her best to comfort the small penguin.

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Scene from UNPFF Chapter 9.

Yes, I am completely holding out on you guys as far as the next chapter goes.

I think I ship these two now...

WHAT HAPPENED TO ME!?

Private/Marlene (c) Tom McGrath & Dreamworks
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Comments: 25

NISSIN8001 [2024-08-31 02:44:13 +0000 UTC]

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GearSolidSnake [2014-09-17 02:31:52 +0000 UTC]

Very well done. Have not read your story yet but plan to simply because of this.

Also, congratulations. This is literally the closest thing to Prilene in existence on the internet. "I think I ship these two now..." They're my OTP but no one else's.

Oh well, still a really good drawing.

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keffer1 [2014-04-28 01:50:42 +0000 UTC]

I know private cute but poor thenπŸ˜”

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StephanoIssexy [2013-02-24 00:50:10 +0000 UTC]

OMG I love how you drew... erm.... I don't remeber her name.... The otter girl! I love how you drew her!

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Penguinator24 [2012-07-14 15:34:25 +0000 UTC]

Nice!

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Linnea95 [2012-03-29 17:48:34 +0000 UTC]

it's so cute!

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KeroseneCanine In reply to Linnea95 [2012-03-29 17:57:54 +0000 UTC]

Thanks ^^

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AERlS [2012-02-18 01:30:08 +0000 UTC]

love it!

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KeroseneCanine In reply to AERlS [2012-02-18 02:01:25 +0000 UTC]

^^ Thanks

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AERlS In reply to KeroseneCanine [2012-02-18 02:02:47 +0000 UTC]

No problem!

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abby-sanban [2012-02-10 23:11:58 +0000 UTC]

I like that scene!!!!!
CanΒ΄t wait for whatΒ΄s next!!!!!

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KeroseneCanine In reply to abby-sanban [2012-02-10 23:13:40 +0000 UTC]

thank you

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abby-sanban In reply to KeroseneCanine [2012-02-10 23:22:14 +0000 UTC]

No problem

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darkness846 [2012-02-08 08:14:18 +0000 UTC]

poor private
cute pic tho

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KeroseneCanine In reply to darkness846 [2012-02-08 11:12:40 +0000 UTC]

^^

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darkness846 In reply to KeroseneCanine [2012-02-08 15:15:15 +0000 UTC]

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penguinsfan90 [2012-02-08 04:21:39 +0000 UTC]

Awwwww cute drawing for a cute chapter *3*

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KeroseneCanine In reply to penguinsfan90 [2012-02-08 11:10:32 +0000 UTC]

^^

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Cudabear [2012-02-08 04:07:51 +0000 UTC]

This is really good!

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KeroseneCanine In reply to Cudabear [2012-02-08 11:12:33 +0000 UTC]

Thank you

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Gammarobot [2012-02-08 01:39:07 +0000 UTC]

Hmm, not a bad idea for a pairing, honestly.
BUT I WANNA READ THE REST OF THE STORY FIRST! XD No, but really, take all the time you need.

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KeroseneCanine In reply to Gammarobot [2012-02-08 02:02:22 +0000 UTC]

XD

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Nightmare-God [2012-02-08 01:28:39 +0000 UTC]

Awww. This is a cute scene.

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KeroseneCanine In reply to Nightmare-God [2012-02-08 02:02:28 +0000 UTC]

Thanks

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Nightmare-God In reply to KeroseneCanine [2012-02-08 02:26:21 +0000 UTC]

You're welcome. ^^

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