kenzie [2002-07-03 13:16:30 +0000 UTC]
i hope you guys all figured out that the "me" is a typo for be in the.. 4th line from the bottom. thanks.
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lowra [2002-07-02 13:44:38 +0000 UTC]
You amaze me as well. I am absolutely drowning in the beauty of this. I love poems with an inkling of ocean in them. The last line is breathtaking. Wonderful...absolutely gorgeous.
Love, Lowra
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estherbadester [2002-07-01 20:35:12 +0000 UTC]
wow kenzie. i've missed your poetry on a regular basis on vacation and it gets me back into it, I haven't written for a couple weeks except for one that's not very good. you inspire me and probably so many other peopole. there's suck an additude to this poem, a definition. it makes my back ache. your wonderful soul thrives in each of your works but this one is so fresh and new to me. it's crisp. I love the way you described suppression and love, my favorite line is:
"Made them seem more perfect like the sky reflected in a puddle in Manhattan"
nothing's jumbled.
you amaze me.
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