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kenzie — Naive boy
Published: 2002-05-23 21:40:41 +0000 UTC; Views: 148; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 26
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Try to smack some color into your grayBreak that lens refracting light and twisting images in your head
Angry as a child shitting his pants
You still don’t know how to change that diaper
So instead you scream
Like the world is what’s tearing you apart
Writhing and sick and pained
Vomit on the hand that feeds you
Point the finger along the razor then cut it off
You’re so clean begging to be dirty
Complaining you’ve been broken hearted many times before
You’ve never kissed a person
Let alone the floor
Wishing to cry yet not being able too
More stoic than still water
You’ve never been really hurt
It’s so hard you almost cry with effort finding things to hate
Will your falseness crush you
You’re too good for love
Thanking the stars you have the computer to see through
It’s dim hollow blue light to guide you
Polaris of your stay-home adventures
It’s you’re cracked lens
Refracting light making endless rainbows of gray
Twisting images in your head
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Comments: 3
"Polaris of your stay-home adventures"
i love that line, it made me laugh...
peace.
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'Will your falseness crush you
You’re too good for love'..i love that line...i just gives off a feeling of sarcasim....great work
-tank
-=don't fear to imagine=-
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oh my god, kenzie, i was just reading, witha *litterally* widened jaw at each continuous phrase and meaning. I read it once after understanding your meaning and following Ben and Ed, and read it over again only to see what you mean, finally. I saw your mataphores and thought to myself that I am so much different, almst the popposite, or at least almost opposite. did you show this to Laura M.? she'd love to see this. it's so harsh, though, it's not your normal Makenzie written poem, because it's got so much feeling in it that you don't normally use to write a poem with. jesus, this is so fresh. wow. just... wow.
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