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Published: 2007-09-14 18:03:35 +0000 UTC; Views: 478; Favourites: 4; Downloads: 0
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Description After the accident with the tree that colapse in front of the car, the girls walk holding hands toward the creepy mansion slowly, zaphy opens the door and a horrible screech sound...
MAE: hey, let's get inside ___making a few steps
ZAPHY: nothing happens ___trying to cheer up alex
ALEX: no, i'm afraid ___walking backwards...

Mae pull her by the arm when suddenly a shadow approached at the end of the long hall and alex gasp, then zaphy says "i saw something"
MAE: come!
ALEX: no, let me go mae ______ mae pull alex
They run to see what approached at the end of the hall so zaphy says " ...give it up" cause the hall seems to never end, when they were a few inches away the lights went off...
ZAPHY: the lights are gone
ALEX: oh, not the lights!
Alex hide behind mae while they walk around the hall to the left and once they saw a new hall a candle light bright before them, and the man they runover holding it, so a long "Ahhhhhh!!!!" sounded from their lips when that man approach them so sudden, zaphy crashes with the desk behind her against the wall while mae grabs the lamp on that table and throw it at his head, the man fall and grab alex by her legs making her fall, mae kicks him while zaphy take alex by the hand and the three girls start to run thru the left hall where the man came until they found an open passage to something that seems to be the kitchen, mae grab a frying pan and alex finds a wooden shovel '-,,-' (used to cook bread)
Mae and alex stood close to the door around the iron table at the middle of the room while zaphy tries to open a metal door that once open she found it was a freezer and that there was no way out of there...
ZAPHY: it's a freezer!!!
MAE: what you mean it's a freezer???... there's no other way out???
ALEX: check for a window!!! ___the thunderlight reveals the man was standing before the door.

The girls yelled "Ahhhhhh!!!!!" while he stares at them with an evilgrin until a new thunderlight shows he was gone i the blink of an eye, so they wonder where he goes so zaphy grab a wooden roller and walk while they walk in line out of the kitchen watching in case he appears again, toward the exit when a shadow of a man appeared at the end of the hall and start walking toward them, alex hit him and stood against the wall holding the shovel while mae push it to the floor and start hitting him with the frying pan then seat over him to start punching, suddenly other shadow approach the hall and scream "hey, what are you doing to him???" he took mae by the shoulders but in the dark instead of take her by the arms he was squeezing her (oYo) against the wall right before the man they runover turn on his flashlight at the end of the hall, so once mae realise what that other man is doing she slap him and he fall over the other guy on the floor, and zaphy stood shocked cause they all look the same but with different hair color...
MAE: if any of you touch me again... i'll kill you!!! ___zaphy grab alex by the arm and walk beside mae.
RED HAIR BOY: what are you doing here???... and why were you attacking my brother??
BLOND BOY: yeah, why you all hits me??
ALEX: he attack us first!!! ___and start crying on zaphy's shoulder.
RED HAIR BOY: and why you hit us?... this is our house!!! ___girls shiver while they walk close to them.
ACCIDENT BLACK HAIR BOY: I invite them... and they took me back home ___the other two boys doubt it's true.
ZAPHY: but we can't stay any longer ___and walk to the front but he step on her way.
BLACK HAIR BOY: I'll will like to invite you all to dinner... would you? ___placing his hand in front of her.

Mae step before zaphy and push his hand away saying "thanks for the invitation, the emotion and the persecution... but we are out of here" but he don't move an inch making the girls start to fear they won't get out alive cause they other two step on each side of the black hair guy while he says "We will like you to stay" zaphy and mae push them away and run at the end of the hall so slowly they follow them...
Alex was the last to run while zaphy run to her car as soon as possible, mae open the broken door and the car won't start, the three brothers walk out of the house and stood before the door staring at them, zaphy try desperately to start the car while alex whispers "they are coming... they are here, hurry" and enter the car, mae seat and while she took the seatbelt the black hair guy says with an evil grin on his face "Something is wrong with your car?... maybe some part is missing after the accident" the other two brothers stare at him surprised of his cinic reaction toward the girls, while they try to start the car as soon as possible but it won't start, zaphy get out of the car furious while mae and alex start yelling at her to return, and once she open checks the car engine a cord is missing so zaphy close it abruptly and walk pissed toward the black hair guy so alex and mae get out of the car and run to stop her, but she punch him first breaking his lower lip, the other two brothers try to stop her from hitting him more, the blond guy try to calm the other two girls while the black hair guy clean his bleeding lip smiling at zaphy...
MAE: why are you doing this???... speak to me, ashole!!! ___struggling from between the brothers.
ZAPHY: you can do anything you want... but never touch my car!!!! ___struggles in the red hair guy's arms.
RED HAIR BOY: hey!!!... calm down for god's sake!!!.... stay calm!!!
BLOND BOY: if you helped him... why did you react so rude now???
MAE: your dear brother try to kill us!!! ...so we don't trust him!!!!___walking close toward his face.
BLOND BOY: what?... Girl, you were the one seated over me and punching me!!!
ALEX: who ever you are, he chase us thru the hall... what we suppose to do if you all look alike!!!! ___crying nerviously.
ZAPHY: I feel sorry for what i done but we will get out of here no matter what !!! ___black hair guy walk closer.
BLACK HAIR BOY: why are you so hurry?____brushing her hair slowly.
ZAPHY: i want to be the less possible close to you ___turn around pushing his hand away.

Created by Karla Mc Cormick
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Comments: 3

rebbekka69 [2011-09-02 01:10:19 +0000 UTC]

omg that sooooo creepy...(oyo) perv idea

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Bianca-Murasaki [2007-09-15 09:20:02 +0000 UTC]




That's one of the odd ways to invite ladies for a dinner

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Kinggigasmon [2007-09-14 19:56:02 +0000 UTC]

Ah, the car that won't start. The oldest cliche in the book, but you do it so greatly!

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