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Published: 2006-07-29 00:59:49 +0000 UTC; Views: 1516; Favourites: 29; Downloads: 69
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HB and 2B pencil on colored texture paper.spend way too much time on this one... more than i initially plan to anyway...
should practice more on muscle structure and all... the curve lines of the human body...
gotta make flesh feel like flesh and strong sunlight feel like strong sunlight...
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the girl's butt looks weird, but the muscle texturing is well done!
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i think you acchieved your goal on this one 
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I really like it. The anatomy looks pretty good, though I see a couple of things that are a little off. I think you've done a good job of capturing the feel of the moment. Since you're working on colored paper, why not use some white pencil to strengthen the feel of the sunlight?
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thanks
the original paper color is light baige, which i think white won't help much.
i overlay the tone in photoshop to make it more 'orange' for this one.
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Oh, that makes sense. 
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i think its lovely! i luv the cross hatching style you use!
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nice strokes! gd body strutures, muscles and proportion as well! n i like the lighting and mood of the whole composition. jz some of the parts can b a lil darker to make the overall composition more contrast i think. the expressions r nice too~! seems like u hav developed ur own style of sketching by using this color of texture paper combining with pencil^^ one of the best sketches i hav seen from u. keep it up!
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thanks
spend around 6 hours on this one... i consider it as a more 'conservative' style.
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wow great shading n lining! also love the expressions of figures.
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very nice line.....your pencil works are great!!!
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