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Kamden — OIAI Ch. 2-5
Published: 2008-06-17 05:18:31 +0000 UTC; Views: 6398; Favourites: 89; Downloads: 39
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Read right to left, like a Japanese mangaPrevious: Ch 2 Page 4
Next: Ch 2 Page 6
Beginning: Cover
My right hand is cramping up so much right now. I was working on both this page and 2-6 at the same time, and it was time and energy consuming.
Since I really wanted to finish both pages tonight, I didn't do much for backgrounds on either of them, but they didn't really need it anyway. 
And I'm fully aware that I accidentally forgot to include Deidara's shuriken holster on the first panel (I realized it way too late).
Also, I almost mixed up which arm was injured on the second panel, but I fixed that one in time (sort of).
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No worries, more shall come (hopefully) soon!
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I totally love the 4th panel, its so Deidara-emotional-like. I totally imagine him like that when he was a child. And I like that you take that comic serious, I mean its not like Deidara beeing the super attractive immortal cool nice guy having sex with everyone. I like that you tell his story with every details and stuff. Really good done. Now I gonna read the next page
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That's a lesson for Deidara to learn
Good to see that you're continuing with this ^__^
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Deidara has many lessons to learn, but whether he actually listens to them is another story.
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Yay! New page! *is happy*
I love reading OIAI. It's awesome.
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Awesome job! Everyone makes mistakes, it's just a part of life. Don't worry about it.
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Yay! Nicely done! Don't worry, Dei-dei! You'll get the hang of it!
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I didn't even notice the missing shuriken holder. It's not the worst or most unobservant mistake. I mean, at least ya' didn't forget an arm or something. That'd be harder to explain away. (Though, it's early, so I'd probably not see that either. 
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Thank you!
I'm not that upset about the shuriken holster mistake. I just know that several people would've pointed it out, and I'd rather hear about mistakes that I wasn't aware of.
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You're welcome!
Ah, I see. Cool beans.
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Poor Deidara, no one said being a long-range specialist would be easy! Then again all great ninjas start from something small. Go on Deidara, soon you're going to be awesome! 8D
No worry on the mistakes. We ALL make them, and it's no biggie.
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Very true. But in chapter 3, he will figure out something that will make it easier for him to be a long-range fighter. . .
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Swell done. Yeah, good luck in figuring it out Deidara D:
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its always annoying when ppl use a stance and use a different jutsu. awsome thing
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