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Published: 2014-09-08 21:36:29 +0000 UTC; Views: 793; Favourites: 18; Downloads: 2
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Description This is my OC Kai! I know I've drawn her before but this is my best depiction of her yet!
She is a daughter of Poseidon, thats why she can control water. She was trained in a different way and that's why she has such a strong control over it. I always picture it like a waterbender (from avatar:TLAB if that helps explain it) 
And thanks to all my friends who convinced me to draw her in normal clothes! I really like how they turned out 
Kai's Bio/Backstory is coming soon...as soon as I have time haha
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MightyAudrey [2014-09-10 04:04:40 +0000 UTC]

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I'm not vary qualified to do this but I will try...

I love this drawing! I love the way the water flows around her so gracefully, and her desighn is wonderful! It shows such creativity , and I can see the work you put into this drawing! I love the way her face just says "beat that I can water bend!" And her stance is ready for action. Hmm... What do you kneed to work on...

One thing I think you kneed to work on is proportions and shapes. The legs could be less curved, and a little longer to compensate for the size of the head and the length of the torso. Hmm... I guess you could work on hands? (Though who isn't bad at hands?)

I think your art is amazeing, and I think with practice anyone can get better (even the most amazeing artists)

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KaiCabin3 In reply to MightyAudrey [2014-09-11 02:56:46 +0000 UTC]

Thank you so much! This is my first critique! I'm glad you liked it and that you got the facial expression perfectly Haha Yes I thought the legs might be a little out of proportion...but I literally spent hours on it so I just kind of got to the piont of "good enough". And oh the hand, the hand, the bottom one to be precise haha it actually looks really good in the original drawing, but I wasn't paying attention when I was outlining it in pen and whoop screwed it up! Live and learn right? I didn't notice the torso (probably to focused on something else haha). Thank you again so much for your critique! You did it wonderfully, I think its always helpful to hear  how something can be improved...thats how you get better right? You were polite but honest and for that I say (for like the third time) THANK YOU!!!

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MightyAudrey In reply to KaiCabin3 [2014-09-11 05:00:18 +0000 UTC]

no problem! I'm glad I could help!

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KaiCabin3 In reply to MightyAudrey [2014-09-11 21:26:00 +0000 UTC]

It was much appriciated!

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MightyAudrey In reply to KaiCabin3 [2014-09-11 23:32:32 +0000 UTC]

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mattjohn1992 [2015-09-12 16:15:33 +0000 UTC]

i love your pictures  

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KaiCabin3 In reply to mattjohn1992 [2015-09-12 16:35:59 +0000 UTC]

Ahhh thank you! I'm glad

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mattjohn1992 In reply to KaiCabin3 [2015-09-12 17:03:46 +0000 UTC]

your welcome

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DonutSeed [2015-07-24 00:49:20 +0000 UTC]

Oh she looks beautiful! I love how the water looks and I would totally wear her shirt, haha

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KaiCabin3 In reply to DonutSeed [2015-07-24 03:25:03 +0000 UTC]

Thank you!! ^-^ I'm really glad you like it! The water was really tricky, but I loved playing with the blending of blues  I'd wear the shirt too! Plaid is my fav 

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DonutSeed In reply to KaiCabin3 [2015-07-24 14:04:36 +0000 UTC]

You're welcome! Oh yeah, I imagine it was difficult getting it to look right, but the shape of it and the colors are spot on!
Yes! I love plaid!

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KaiCabin3 In reply to DonutSeed [2015-07-26 01:04:29 +0000 UTC]

Ahhh   I'm so happy you think so!  

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DonutSeed In reply to KaiCabin3 [2015-07-26 20:48:11 +0000 UTC]

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AlchemistWitch14 [2014-09-14 03:47:18 +0000 UTC]

Epic

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KaiCabin3 In reply to AlchemistWitch14 [2014-09-14 15:54:55 +0000 UTC]

Thank you!!

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AlchemistWitch14 In reply to KaiCabin3 [2014-09-15 21:24:52 +0000 UTC]

your welcome

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starbreese [2014-09-08 22:37:29 +0000 UTC]

Love it! She looks amazing

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KaiCabin3 In reply to starbreese [2014-09-09 00:13:08 +0000 UTC]

Ahhh thanks! I'm so glad you like it

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starbreese In reply to KaiCabin3 [2014-09-09 01:52:58 +0000 UTC]

You're welcome

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PeachDaisyRosalina01 [2014-09-08 22:34:12 +0000 UTC]

Wow, this is awesome! I like her hair, it's pretty. So she's a daughter of Poseidon? Wow. So she's a Greek demigod, then?

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KaiCabin3 In reply to PeachDaisyRosalina01 [2014-09-09 00:15:19 +0000 UTC]

Yepp she is! And thank you so much!  Her hair is one of my favorite features! 

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PeachDaisyRosalina01 In reply to KaiCabin3 [2014-09-09 01:09:52 +0000 UTC]

Cool! And you're welcome ^^

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KaiCabin3 In reply to PeachDaisyRosalina01 [2014-09-09 03:43:08 +0000 UTC]

Oh and thanks for the suggestion on her outfit! I really liked how it turned out and I hope tou do too

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PeachDaisyRosalina01 In reply to KaiCabin3 [2014-09-09 20:25:42 +0000 UTC]

You're welcome. It turned out really well!

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KaiCabin3 In reply to PeachDaisyRosalina01 [2014-09-09 20:36:20 +0000 UTC]

O good!

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PeachDaisyRosalina01 In reply to KaiCabin3 [2014-09-09 22:17:08 +0000 UTC]

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