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Akibono [2012-04-14 03:58:49 +0000 UTC]
that wing looks deadly
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nestbeing [2012-04-02 10:06:58 +0000 UTC]
Nice job, but I think maybe some lighter colours incorporated into the background would make his transparency look a lot better. Right now it looks a bit awkward, especially since there's a lot of disreprency between the transparency of his clothing and wings and his face. I think you need to find a way to show his transparency without the black becoming overpowering.
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Kai-ni In reply to nestbeing [2012-04-02 20:43:52 +0000 UTC]
His wings are SUPPOSED to be more solid than he is. And I wanted the background black x3 Nothing personal, I just don't go back and re-do old art.
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nestbeing In reply to Kai-ni [2012-04-03 00:08:19 +0000 UTC]
It's okay for it to be intentional, and it's not really the wings that are the problem. The transparency in his body and face is what makes him look odd, since it's all at different levels. And if the black background isn't working (which in my opinion it isn't) explore different ways to make it work. Even if you don't go back and re-do this piece, keep it in mind for next time.
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Kai-ni In reply to nestbeing [2012-04-03 00:31:26 +0000 UTC]
His clothes are more solid because there are more layers there than just his bare skin.
He's supposed to be ghostly and unnatural. Now you're obviously a better artist than I am and I'm not going to argue with you, but I happy to like the black background and I think a lighter background would look wrong.
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Xirene [2012-04-02 02:52:00 +0000 UTC]
very nice!
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PattYaan [2012-04-02 00:48:26 +0000 UTC]
Keep training, better your painting and your traits. But, anyway... good job ^//^
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Kai-ni In reply to PattYaan [2012-04-02 00:49:30 +0000 UTC]
I practice every day ^^
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XXAnemia [2012-04-01 23:57:10 +0000 UTC]
what a cool concept! i love the design of his wings.
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Kai-ni In reply to XXAnemia [2012-04-02 00:00:44 +0000 UTC]
Thanks!
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AuroraArt [2012-03-27 01:53:58 +0000 UTC]
Beautiful work! ^^
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Kai-ni In reply to AuroraArt [2012-03-27 02:01:08 +0000 UTC]
Thank you~
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roamingtigress [2012-03-17 04:59:50 +0000 UTC]
Wonderful wing design here!
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iam-hungry [2012-03-17 01:52:06 +0000 UTC]
The wings are really cool. the guy kind of reminds me of Light from Death note XD
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Kai-ni In reply to iam-hungry [2012-03-17 01:53:58 +0000 UTC]
OMG NO.
But thanks for the compliment on the wings XD
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iam-hungry In reply to Kai-ni [2012-03-17 02:25:36 +0000 UTC]
I didnt mean the light thing as an insult! >.<... I like Light!
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Kai-ni In reply to iam-hungry [2012-03-17 02:57:46 +0000 UTC]
Well I don't like my characters being compared to popular fandom characters xDD no offense.
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iam-hungry In reply to Kai-ni [2012-03-17 03:06:11 +0000 UTC]
Oh.. im sorry then >.<
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Kai-ni In reply to iam-hungry [2012-03-17 03:13:47 +0000 UTC]
NP, people do it, I just don't prefer to have it happen XD I get a little tired of OH HE LOOKS LIKE ----
He's my character >.< not everyone with short hair looks like ---- or whatever.
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