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Published: 2004-03-01 15:45:23 +0000 UTC; Views: 88; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 18
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Description time
ticks away at my life
despite my decisions
against my will
like
a sadistic killer
a ravishing disease
like water in my hand
running
constanly out of control
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Comments: 19

jealousyplaguesme [2004-03-06 16:36:59 +0000 UTC]

DUDE! it was great. really great. it was short and sweet, well not really sweet but you know what i'm talking about. i love it thanks you for writing this heh...bye

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justnikki In reply to jealousyplaguesme [2004-03-07 04:25:27 +0000 UTC]

thanks for getting so excited.. lol.. im very glad you enjoyed it.

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gemini86 [2004-03-02 07:55:05 +0000 UTC]

sniff so true, the most valuable words can be so meaniful when it's put in use in the right place

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justnikki In reply to gemini86 [2004-03-02 13:56:53 +0000 UTC]

thanks dee

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xxxfearofperfectionx [2004-03-01 19:46:26 +0000 UTC]

woot..i love it nikki keep them coming

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justnikki In reply to xxxfearofperfectionx [2004-03-01 21:08:07 +0000 UTC]

aww.. rusty.. thanks!

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lesseroflindsey [2004-03-01 17:40:21 +0000 UTC]

short. sweet. beautiful.

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justnikki In reply to lesseroflindsey [2004-03-01 21:10:03 +0000 UTC]

thank ya much

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justnikki In reply to lesseroflindsey [2004-03-01 21:09:54 +0000 UTC]

thank ya much

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isometimeswonder [2004-03-01 16:36:53 +0000 UTC]

nikki i like this one alot its a great poem

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Mr-Mop [2004-03-01 16:03:27 +0000 UTC]

i like the comparison between water and time like the sand idea but more originial!

great poem

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justnikki In reply to Mr-Mop [2004-03-01 16:09:12 +0000 UTC]

thanks

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Mr-Mop In reply to justnikki [2004-03-01 16:10:34 +0000 UTC]

it is if most people were describing time it would sand but you've gone with a more original aproach. I respect that and it resuted in a good poem

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justnikki In reply to Mr-Mop [2004-03-01 16:12:10 +0000 UTC]

you are to much to kind..

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Mr-Mop In reply to justnikki [2004-03-01 16:12:56 +0000 UTC]

no just honest

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justnikki In reply to Mr-Mop [2004-03-01 16:15:06 +0000 UTC]

hahaha.. well thanks

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Mr-Mop In reply to justnikki [2004-03-01 16:15:30 +0000 UTC]

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AlmondBlossem [2004-03-01 15:53:02 +0000 UTC]

Thats a REALLY good poem. I like it.

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justnikki In reply to AlmondBlossem [2004-03-01 16:11:17 +0000 UTC]

thank you ever so much

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