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Published: 2004-02-23 04:02:39 +0000 UTC; Views: 120; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 13
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i hate you..more then you can ever know..
you are so fake around people
when your home.. you are a prick to everyone
you are a self centered bastard.. everyone thinks so
they are just afraid to say it..
but me.. im not afraid anymore.
i used to be afraid of you..
but then i realized..
it was pointless to be in fear in your own home
i just got so tired of it..
so im going to stand up to you..
im going to scream back when your hurtful words are flowing
you dont even realize what your doing..
what your saying..
but i know what im saying..
what im saying is..
i hate you..
how does it feel to know that part of your family..
your own flesh and blood
your youngest hates you..
hate is such a strong word..
but i think.. it fits here..
im not going to fake it anymore..
im going to let everyone know..
i dont respect you..
i hate you dad.
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Comments: 10
wow, that was nice to re-read 
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i knew this was about your dad in the 3rd stanza i guess you would call it but 3rd paragraph. this was good. good job
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wow, i have read this like six time hehe and it's so wow..
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wow....thanks for making me want to cry
hate is such a strong word..
but i think.. it fits here..
im not going to fake it anymore..
im going to let everyone know..
i dont respect you..
i hate you dad.
took the words outta my head i tell you...great job
rusty
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aww.. i didnt mean to make you want to cry.. that makes me want to cry.. i just had to get it out.. im not going to pretend i like him anymore.. because i dont. but thanks for the comment
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poetry is a great way to let out emotions and let off steam. You wrote good, but you wrote sad. I would say a great thing to do would be to pray for him. Put him in God's hands and see if he shapes. Anyway, you wrote good.
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