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Joshi38 β€” True Sword Again

Published: 2012-09-30 17:07:38 +0000 UTC; Views: 710; Favourites: 5; Downloads: 16
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Description Entry for the contest, the theme is to take a previously made piece of art and re-do it to show your progress as an artist.

The piece I chose is this [link] which at the time I probably thought was really good and now I'm just embarrassed over (and seriously, that title...)

Funnily enough, I did that piece as a re-do of another piece ([link] ) so I guess in 6 years time, I'll re-do this new piece and it'll be even better... unlikely though.

Since this is meant to showcase all that I've learnt in the past 6 years, I didn't want this to simply be an exercise in re-drawing and re-painting the same image, I wanted to incorporate a little basic design knowledge as well, so I did some thumbnail work to establish a decent composition and worked with different colours until I got to something I kind of liked.

I'm somewhat pleased with how this came out, with a bit more time I would likely do a little bit more, but like with all the work I do, I tend to bite off more than I can chew. If this were simply a picture of a sword, it would have been great, but with the tree and leaves and the grass (oh the grass...), it's not as good as I would like.
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Comments: 7

Skullflower90 [2012-10-03 18:04:51 +0000 UTC]

Uuhm I have to agree, I donΒ΄t really understand the title from the first drawing ^^ I like the lighting in the newer one, especially on the back of the tree, the ivy there looks so three-dimensional!

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Joshi38 In reply to Skullflower90 [2012-10-03 19:41:37 +0000 UTC]

Oh I'm sure that back then I thought I was being insightful or something... in hindsight I was just being a douche.

Thanks for the comment.

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drumthrasher4hr [2012-10-02 00:14:50 +0000 UTC]

A great improvement from the original...
Nice play with light and the color composition is very serene...
Keep it up!

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Joshi38 In reply to drumthrasher4hr [2012-10-02 05:53:44 +0000 UTC]

Thanks

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drumthrasher4hr In reply to Joshi38 [2012-10-02 06:20:45 +0000 UTC]

You're very welcome! Good luck!

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ksenyan [2012-09-30 18:32:52 +0000 UTC]

New work is wonderful

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Joshi38 In reply to ksenyan [2012-09-30 20:22:02 +0000 UTC]

Thanks, I worked hard on it.

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