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JooH — Loneliness payment

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Description The animals living on tat cave, far from everything, was unquiet. Your presence was bothering them. He doesn’t care. He was doomed to this end, until the eternity. Now, he no longer has a body, and, his soul, lonely soul, was the only thing from him that remains. His live is no more than walk, restless, on that cold and dark cave. The souls from the place where he lived, often carries a amulet, with pleasant words, as a memento for the souls without a body. This one, lonely, didn’t have any on his. He didn’t cares, at all, his was ripped. He did it on a hunger moment. The only time he felt since he was dead. Now, there was nothing more than those sad eyes, behind a ripped amulet, on his Chinese turban, searching for every movement, on his dark prison. His sadness and loneliness is enough to call him as “Lonely”. A name that fits perfectly with him for his past and for his present.
The days could pass, but, he doesn’t cares. Nothing is going to change for him; his soul was doomed to be tortured by the silence forever. But, after long and lonely years, someone has entered on his cave. So, the brave hero, the only one, in years, had enough courage to challenge him. So, they were head to head. The blessed warrior was staring him. His holy sword is the only thing that could hit an evil soul, as he looks like. Griping his holy sword, the hero tackled against him. The lonely soul was scared, but, when he was alive, he was a great fighter. He may have some chance.
The fight has started. With his holy wrath, the knight ran against the evil soul. With all his strength he bashed the enemy. Even with that powerful, the Lonely one stood up, and, countered with a punch on the knight’s face. So, with a merciless rage, the soul attacked the hero. But, he blocked it using his shield and countered with the sword. The blow made Lonely fall in the ground. In the ground, he was without any chance to dodge an attack. His executor was ready to give the last attack. But, in the impact with the ground, something fell from his pocket. It was his beloved. The one he never will see again. He will be vanished now. The end of everything has arrived. No more hope, no more tears, no more soul. Staring for the portrait, he started to cry and review all his whole life:

In a village, on the mountains, two children were playing around. They were playing happy. Sister and brother, young children, happy children growing up fast, but, everyday they grows up, the brotherhood feeling was giving place to the love feeling on their hearths. But, how terrible that kind of feeling is for sister and brother, no one had courage to tell the feeling to the other…
- My brother! – she said, out and loud, around the village. – Where are you, my darling brother? – He kept saying, while she walks around, looking for him.
They are adults, now. She became a sweet and beautiful woman, and, he, a strong and skilled fighter.
- I am here, sister! – He answered. He was sitting near a lake in the forest. So, she went to meet him. So, she found him staring to the lake, and, lost on his thoughts. The afternoon was beautiful there. The sunset, with his crimson color, like a painting, was like coloring the autumn leaves, falling on the ground.
-What are u doing here, my brother? – She asked
-Staring… - He answered.
-Staring what? You rarely do things like that. – She said.
- Unfortunately, that is all I can do.
- Do what? May I know?
- that all I can do, since I never will have a chance to reach you as I want to. – He stood up, after say that. She was surprised. What was he talking about?
Both was head to head. His eyes was piercing her. They was nearest each other than never.
- My… brother… - she said, but, the words died before get out her mouth.
- My sweet sister… I… I love you! – He said, after all. – More than you thinks! Isn’t a bare brother and sister love! Each day, I want you on my arms, more than never.
- My little… brother…
So, with a kiss, they’ve sealed the love that always had on their hearts.
- I love you too, my dear brother. Since a long time ago, I waited for this moment.
They were alone. The sunshine was the only one knowing about that forbidden act of love. But, even being forbidden, was so sweet for them. The birds singing were like they were agreeing with the lovers’ act.
They spend a long time there. The sun wasn’t the only one to know about their acts. But, the moon, the stars and all the whole universe were seeing a act of ardent and sweet love. On that night, they done all the dreams they thought never going to happen one day.
In the dawn, the lovebirds were coming back to home. But, they never thought their home was going to be the end not only for the road, but, their happiness. Waiting for them, was their father. They were caught!
-Your impure! What kind of honor do you think you have! – He said, while they was listen, without any reaction.
- Your impure souls doesn’t belong to this place anymore! So, you two are going to pay with your blood. You two are going to perform the “ritual of payment”.
So, they has being arrested, until the other day, when they are going to perform the ritual, and torture their souls forever, without any hope to reach the paradise, as the other souls.
On the other day, they were on the temple, ready to perform that bloody ritual, called as “payment”. So, with his leftovers, the young fighter tried a last chance of escape. Using all his strength, he fought against all the guards on the temple. With a strong punch, he knocked down a guard, before the other ones reach him. Knowing the fail means death, he fought with all his strength. He was fighting with a supernatural power. No one can say that feeling was fear, rage, or, his beloved love.
By the way, even fighting with a super human power, he couldn’t defeat all the village, alone. So, as his last power, he opened a path, for his sister run away.
- Run, my darling sister! – A tear fell on his face, he never will see his beloved again. – Fare thee well, my sweet hearth.
Without knows what to do, he stopped for a while. What she must do? Die with his love, or, ran away? Taken by the fear, she choose to ran away. So, while she was running thought the village, by the path his brother opened, to save her self, all he can do was watch his beloved letting him to the death. Inside the temple, and, alone, all he can do was perform the ritual alone.
- I will do without pain. My darling – He promised to himself.
So, with a single blow, and, without any pain, as he said, he killed himself, with a sharp dagger. His body fell, without any life, on the ground, while his tears were mixing with the blood. Far away from there, the girl was still running. Her body couldn’t hold anymore. She fell in the ground and started to cry.
Now, while she was on the material world, he was dead, lonely soul, walking alone, in the darkness, without any hope to reach the paradise. So, he found that cave, where he was until now. A cave, as dark and lonely as his hearth…

Now, he was going to die, by a holy blade of a noble warrior. Crying, he was ready to be vanished from this world, forever.
So, the hero’s expression, has changed, from the wrath, to, clemency:
- What kind of knight I am? – he said to himself – Blind by the rage, I almost did a mistake! Never, an evil creature will have a feeling like u showed now… Devils never will cry like you.
So, the hero released his sword, and, let it fall in the floor. And, started to think about what he was doing, while he was staring to his, no more, foe.
Far from there, they heard a sweet voice:
- I learned is not good to live alone…
When it came near them, the ghost started to cry again… but, wasn’t sad tears. For the first time, he was happy. Since the day on the lake, he hasn’t smiled. The one who arrived on the cave was his beloved sister.
- My love, since that day, I am searching for you…. – She said, while he couldn’t even speak. – People doesn’t lives for money, people doesn’t lives for food, People lives for love. - She started to cry too. – I found out was you who gives me strength to live, so, I doesn’t cares to die to be with you. Our bodies can be dead, but, our love never will!
They hug each other, and, later a long kiss, she said:
- We cant reach the paradise, so, let’s go create our own paradise, where we can live happy, together.
- Let’s go, my sweet… - he said, after all
So, while they were disappearing, he stared to the warrior:
-Thank you, thank you very much – He said, with tears on his face, but, now, it was happiness tears.

So, both disappeared, letting nothing more on that world. The knight, smiling, sure he did the right thing, took his sword, his horse and got his way.
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