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Published: 2004-12-10 07:51:33 +0000 UTC; Views: 4303; Favourites: 28; Downloads: 202
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Description A commission for my sister. Being that it was in the middle of exam season and the Christmas rush, I'm a little surprised I got it done at all. I couldn't get it to scan to look as nice as it does in real life, so I added some colour to it - I like it...

The original, uncoloured version can be seen here .

Graphite. Photo references used (I had no idea what a dahlia was *LOL*). Colour in Adobe PhotoShop 7.0. 19.

This was a commission. If you're interested in commissioning me, contact me via email or dA.
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Comments: 44

Jonny-Mistfit [2008-09-17 20:00:05 +0000 UTC]

very nice

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jocarra In reply to Jonny-Mistfit [2008-09-17 20:39:37 +0000 UTC]

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wildwildLizzy [2005-02-01 20:19:11 +0000 UTC]

exquisite detail in the petals and colour of the flower! (what patience you must have.) The little bee is so CUTE. I'm totally impressed since you had no point of reference!...hat's off to you hun!!! Great job!!!

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jocarra In reply to wildwildLizzy [2005-02-01 22:04:35 +0000 UTC]

Aww, thank you. Surprisingly, it wasn't too hard to shade the flower in Oh, and actually, I did have a reference for the bee, but it was kind of facing the wrong way, so I just kind of studied it to get the gist.

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wildwildLizzy In reply to jocarra [2005-02-01 22:42:40 +0000 UTC]

Well, either way...it was very well done. I really liked the misty/early morning/quietness kind of atmosphere it projected...you know...the bee busy at work...no one else around...*nods*...

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jocarra In reply to wildwildLizzy [2005-02-01 22:47:44 +0000 UTC]

Aww, hehe, I never really looked at it that way... That's neat

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gingernut [2005-01-25 14:12:02 +0000 UTC]

the bee is so cute!!dont u just want to hug it!!!

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jocarra In reply to gingernut [2005-01-25 22:03:56 +0000 UTC]

Heheh, I'd maybe hug the bee, 'cept it would either sting me, or I'd squish it X3

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gingernut In reply to jocarra [2005-01-28 12:02:52 +0000 UTC]

true v true!!!

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Sinann [2005-01-04 10:38:05 +0000 UTC]

cute! love the colors...the bee looks real..very cool!

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jocarra In reply to Sinann [2005-01-05 03:28:44 +0000 UTC]

Hehe, it is kind of cute... and I'm glad you think the bee looks real Thank you

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meoww [2004-12-27 21:33:28 +0000 UTC]

you're a great artist!

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jocarra In reply to meoww [2004-12-28 10:17:51 +0000 UTC]

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Zyenthillias [2004-12-14 04:32:22 +0000 UTC]

Wow! This is beautiful, Jen! I really like the texture! Looks like colored pencil, almost....Is it easy coloring graphite drawings in photoshop? I've gotten several requests to turn Insomnia into a CG image, but so far my attempts have been pretty pitiful...any advice, or anything?

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jocarra In reply to Zyenthillias [2004-12-14 06:34:40 +0000 UTC]

Aww, thanks! Hmm... I'd say it is quite easy colouring graphite drawings in PhotoShop, because you already have a sketch to work with! The hardest part, I'd say, is making sure you don't go too dark and shroud out your darker details, especially if you use "multiply/burn/darken" mode when you colour. As for suggestions, I'd make sure you keep your original sketch safe on one layer, create a new multiply layer, block in some colour that isn't too dark - stay away from dark colours, because the multiplying will make it seem darker, anyways. Just... Well, it mostly is up to your CGing painting skills. I find I don't have to use much colour to suggest shading, because I've already done that in pencil, so concentrate on colour as opposed to lighting. Another useful layer setting is "colour" but it makes for a different effect entirely.

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Zyenthillias In reply to jocarra [2004-12-19 19:30:37 +0000 UTC]

Wow, thanks! I haven't played around with the layer modes much, apart from multiply for the original drawing and normal for all the rest...I'll have to do that! By the way, Do you know how to make many textures without it being on the underlying sketch? That's the next thing I want to learn (I hate the "clay" look), but filters can make things look so flat! I think you know what I mean.

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jocarra In reply to Zyenthillias [2004-12-19 20:01:34 +0000 UTC]

Making textures? Well, always leave your underlying sketch alone, I'd recommend - if you are going to mess with it, I'd suggest you "duplicate layer" and always save one that is unadulterated.

If you're looking for non-sketched, non-filter-using texture, that depends largely on 1) your painting skill, but also 2) the smudge tool and 3) the different brushes.

Try messing with the burn or dodge tool for the heck of it (although I rarely, rarely use it), or for fur trying laying down some flat colours, then smudging them (it takes patience for it to turn out well) using the smudge tool to create a feathery fur effect.

I know you were looking for non-filter techniques, but using a filter combined with "traditional" digital painting techniques, it can create a really rich effect. Try putting a filter on its own layer, reducing opacity, and then painting your own version of the texture on another layer - it'll combine both effects into a new kind of texture. Don't ever rely on textures alone - we all can identify when someone's used a render cloud filter, or whatever - so mix them with airbrushing/painting/smudging.

You can also use the different brushes to make different textures, or if you want to try, you can find a stock image of a desired texture, such as gravel. You give it its own layer, then manipulate it so it looks the way you want it to and so it is the right size, then try giving it different layer effects (try overlay). That will superimpose the texture onto the part of your image. It's kind of like cheating, but often this sort of thing can require a lot of photomanipulating and tweaking and painting, so it's not exactly cheating, either, because it requires quite a bit of work, depending.

The last technique I ever use is just meticulously painting the desired texture myself. Little blending details can be taken care of with the smudge tool, while richness and depth can be aided by having lots of layers of colours (that's how good acrylic painters work - lots of colour layers to create rich but non-cartoony colours). Avoid using just one or two colours in an area, just like you avoid using just one coloured pencil to shade something - it's flat!

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Zyenthillias In reply to jocarra [2004-12-23 16:46:37 +0000 UTC]

Wow! Thank you so much! This is very helpful! I'll definitely give it a shot!

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jocarra In reply to Zyenthillias [2004-12-23 21:48:07 +0000 UTC]

No problem - lemme know how it goes.

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Eolhin [2004-12-13 05:24:19 +0000 UTC]

Lovely, the details on the bee are great! I like the texture of the background as well.

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jocarra In reply to Eolhin [2004-12-13 23:05:00 +0000 UTC]

Aww, thank you! I'm glad they turned out.

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Rei-David [2004-12-12 04:52:26 +0000 UTC]

You did it again.Beautiful coloring. Its texture makes me thing in something in something soft and fluffy . plus I collect bees that makes it better hehe. *goes and steals the bee*

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jocarra In reply to Rei-David [2004-12-12 04:58:57 +0000 UTC]

Aww, you collect bees? Heheh, that's really cute and you can borrow my fuzzy bee so long as you bring him back .

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Rei-David In reply to jocarra [2004-12-12 05:12:23 +0000 UTC]

okay.. *takes the fuzzy bee to the hive*

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jocarra In reply to Rei-David [2004-12-12 06:38:02 +0000 UTC]

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Rei-David In reply to jocarra [2004-12-13 00:59:59 +0000 UTC]

oh ..so you are laughin of the hive.
Bees ataaaack her!!!!! Xp

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jocarra In reply to Rei-David [2004-12-13 06:03:13 +0000 UTC]

NOOOOOOO!!! *runs off screaming and flailing wildly*

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Rei-David In reply to jocarra [2004-12-14 04:01:19 +0000 UTC]

You can run but you can't hide

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jocarra In reply to Rei-David [2004-12-14 05:22:15 +0000 UTC]

Eeeeeeeee

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Rei-David In reply to jocarra [2004-12-14 20:54:46 +0000 UTC]

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FoxLogic [2004-12-11 19:39:49 +0000 UTC]

so peaceful. great work.

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jocarra In reply to FoxLogic [2004-12-11 19:59:49 +0000 UTC]

Thank you. I usually don't do things like this, but I'm kind of glad my sister got me too - maybe I'll do more when I get the time...

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cfitzart [2004-12-11 12:15:46 +0000 UTC]

wonderful drawing! very pretty i love the way the bright flower stands out against the dark background. the bee looks great too

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jocarra In reply to cfitzart [2004-12-11 20:02:09 +0000 UTC]

Thank you! I actually found that the flower stands out even more in the black and white version, but I just couldn't make it look like it does in the original... so I thought I might be able to fix it by adding colour, hehe. Oh, and I'm glad you like the bee - I think he's cute

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Warmaster [2004-12-11 07:31:53 +0000 UTC]

Oohhh.... I'm working for your pencil technique. Very nice!

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jocarra In reply to Warmaster [2004-12-11 20:19:16 +0000 UTC]

My pencil technique? That's very kind of you - thank you!

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dracothrope [2004-12-10 22:10:03 +0000 UTC]

That's lovely! ^_^ The bee especially... <3!

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jocarra In reply to dracothrope [2004-12-11 20:31:16 +0000 UTC]

Hehe! Thanks I like the bee, too - I wanted him to look nice and fat, and pettably fuzzy.

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furryphotos [2004-12-10 13:49:57 +0000 UTC]

Beautifully done

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jocarra In reply to furryphotos [2004-12-11 20:43:03 +0000 UTC]

Thanks

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turtlemj [2004-12-10 08:07:44 +0000 UTC]

you did a really good job!

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jocarra In reply to turtlemj [2004-12-11 21:09:10 +0000 UTC]

Thank you - your graphite work is awesome, by the way

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spamboi [2004-12-10 07:54:16 +0000 UTC]

ahh beautiful colors and wonderful detail. i like how the background color matches well with the flower. i do like the feel of the picture; the graininess of it and all.

the bee looks great. nice and plump.

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jocarra In reply to spamboi [2004-12-11 20:50:24 +0000 UTC]

Aww, thank you . I tried to make the background match colours, while at the same time working to contrast against it a little to make the flower stand out. I think the graininess was largely due to the paper texture I was working on - it gave the piece a kind of warmth about it. Hehehe, and yeah, I wanted the bee to be fat and cute

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