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Published: 2009-08-22 06:35:09 +0000 UTC; Views: 2002; Favourites: 84; Downloads: 0
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Description His eyes look gimpy to me still.. I don't know if it's just the shading or what..
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AinuLaire [2010-02-21 09:36:38 +0000 UTC]

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Well, first off, I'd say that the watermark is unnecessary seeing as it's illegal to sell prints of copyrighted characters (as in films), but whatever works for you, though it does unfortunately cover up some details.

Anyways, a very well-done likeness of Tom Felton as Draco Malfoy. I don't know the original reference picture, nor do I have the actor's face memorized as I do the faces of other characters (such as the ones in the fandom your username comes from), but I'll do my best. What I really like are the eyes; you really captured his life within them. They may be just a slight tad too far apart, but it is not very noticeable. Excellent job with the eyebrows; many people tend to forgot that eyebrows are made up of separate strands of hair.

The biggest thing that I would say you need to work on is the shading. The lines are obvious and don't blend well with the other tones of shading. The best way to remedy that would be layers of lead, starting light and going dark, as well as liberal use of blending materials, especially around the areas where the shading value changes. Definitely try and make your dark darks, where there is no detail (like his ear), one solid color so we don't see the lines.

Overall, a very good job.

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puffinlove [2013-01-28 00:48:50 +0000 UTC]

love it! appreciate the varied shading, very great piece!

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JLafleurArt In reply to puffinlove [2013-04-02 01:05:08 +0000 UTC]

Thank you!

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NicosGirl [2012-07-25 16:47:00 +0000 UTC]

It is really good, but you mentioned that the eyes looked "gimpy". I see them as looking two different directions. It's just slight, but the left eye is angled more forward than up.

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Blue-Demon-Hybrid [2010-04-18 04:20:52 +0000 UTC]

This is really good.

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JLafleurArt In reply to Blue-Demon-Hybrid [2010-04-18 05:13:29 +0000 UTC]

Thank you

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Svetlana-Byaka [2010-04-17 12:27:29 +0000 UTC]

nice)
but something is wrong with his eyes

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JLafleurArt In reply to Svetlana-Byaka [2010-04-17 16:28:35 +0000 UTC]

yeah, we actually figures out it's because he's cross-eyed in the picture from looking at something that's too close to his face.

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Moist-von-Lipwig [2010-02-06 18:00:40 +0000 UTC]

I love the shading, very realistic.

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JLafleurArt In reply to Moist-von-Lipwig [2010-02-06 22:10:53 +0000 UTC]

Thank you!

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MayamitY [2010-01-15 19:19:00 +0000 UTC]

Great! the shading is so well done!

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JLafleurArt In reply to MayamitY [2010-01-16 05:35:22 +0000 UTC]

Thank you!

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mewemedy [2010-01-15 17:04:14 +0000 UTC]

Very well drawn. I can't draw humans, only manga-humans

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JLafleurArt In reply to mewemedy [2010-01-16 05:35:12 +0000 UTC]

Haha! well thank you

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GraceTheHedgehog [2010-01-15 13:21:06 +0000 UTC]

So beautiful! He looks delicious as ever <3 you should send it to him or leave a comment on his twitter... i'm sure he'd love it!

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JLafleurArt In reply to GraceTheHedgehog [2010-01-16 05:34:34 +0000 UTC]

Thank you!! Really you think so? that would be awesome!

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GraceTheHedgehog In reply to JLafleurArt [2010-01-16 17:19:26 +0000 UTC]

Definitely!! You should do it!

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JLafleurArt In reply to GraceTheHedgehog [2010-01-17 03:07:01 +0000 UTC]

hmm.. I wonder if my Twitter account is still there, I haven't been on since last summer..

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GRAPHINTENT [2009-09-16 02:48:06 +0000 UTC]

Good work!

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JLafleurArt In reply to GRAPHINTENT [2009-09-16 22:02:39 +0000 UTC]

Thank you

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GRAPHINTENT In reply to JLafleurArt [2009-09-16 22:58:02 +0000 UTC]

You're welcome!

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Mimitchki [2009-09-13 04:08:51 +0000 UTC]

Awsome, I love it!!

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JLafleurArt In reply to Mimitchki [2009-09-14 04:26:44 +0000 UTC]

Thanks!

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Mimitchki In reply to JLafleurArt [2009-09-14 11:24:32 +0000 UTC]

np! ^.^

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kikomi [2009-08-26 00:56:14 +0000 UTC]

beautiful!
If it makes you feel better, I did a painting of this and his eyes look gimpy. It might just be the photo.

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JLafleurArt In reply to kikomi [2009-08-26 04:25:23 +0000 UTC]

Thanks.. that does make me feel better.. I tried to fix it a few times..

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JLMob [2009-08-25 16:07:35 +0000 UTC]

Nah. His eyes are always gimpy XD

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JLafleurArt In reply to JLMob [2009-08-25 17:17:19 +0000 UTC]

thanks for the reassurance Jenn..

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JLMob In reply to JLafleurArt [2009-08-28 17:29:28 +0000 UTC]

ku ku ku XD

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JLafleurArt In reply to JLMob [2009-08-28 22:56:16 +0000 UTC]

You're so weird..

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lp8 [2009-08-22 19:49:50 +0000 UTC]

nice choice of reference im not a harry potter fan it looks great the eyes are fine the only thing that may b wrong is the black areas it would look more realistic if it was really really black

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JLafleurArt In reply to lp8 [2009-08-23 04:47:04 +0000 UTC]

Thanks! soo hard to do with pencils though, I made them as dark as I could for now..

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lp8 In reply to JLafleurArt [2009-08-23 15:53:29 +0000 UTC]

i understand i have the same problem u welcome

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JLafleurArt In reply to lp8 [2009-08-23 17:40:16 +0000 UTC]

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