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DeezzArt [2018-09-11 17:07:40 +0000 UTC]

this honestly looks incredibly beautiful !! 

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mchoi14 [2018-09-11 05:58:52 +0000 UTC]

Hey, I think the details on the hair and bubbles look really nice. They really tie the vertical piece together. 

There are two major issues I can see. The first is the face, and the second is general anatomy. 

Starting with the face, the eyes are too far apart from each other and too far up on her forehead. While it may seem odd to hear this due to the there being not too much space on the face, I think that may be due to how you drew the chin. Because of how V-shaped it is, it leaves very little room for facial features despite the vertical size of the head. This coupled with the big eyes makes it look a bit cramped along with the displacement. 

For anatomy, there are a few things to point out. The one I noticed first was the stomach. It's very confusing what that line is that leads from her top to her belt on her right side. If it's the stomach, then she would be twisting to her right which isn't consistent with the rest of the drawing. Another issue is the that the shoulders are the same size. Based on her chest position, she should be facing her left shoulder towards us. This would make her left side seem smaller in perspective, which you did for the chest but not the shoulders. The final major anatomy issue I can see is with her hand. I also have a feeling that her weird shoulder pose was you trying to hide the other hand to avoid drawing both of them. Unfortunately, there's not really a simple solution to this. You simply have to force yourself to keep drawing hands and feet. A small technique that helps me out is to draw the palm as a circle and straight lines as the fingers. This gives a blueprint for where the fingers should go. 

I look forward to seeing more of your pieces in the future!

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theJfluffy [2018-09-08 05:02:30 +0000 UTC]

Magnificent! 

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Exempdent [2018-09-08 00:22:39 +0000 UTC]

Bubbles!      

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