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Published: 2007-09-09 22:49:39 +0000 UTC; Views: 865; Favourites: 19; Downloads: 2
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Oh my I love this one so much.Especially with my shoes, plus I love Sixties stuff, not as much as Lydz but still loads
Model: ~Yamapikaya
I hope you like it!
(EDIT: I remade it a little) ;]
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Comments: 38
Very lovely, I do love the shoes too!
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Thanks!
Lyds and I want to do some b/w film shots like this fo sho when we know where we're at
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I like this very muchly, it reminds me of twiggy in the 60s
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Yeah I know what you mean!! 
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I like the composition and the position of the model. The way she sits reminds me of someone uncomfortable and feeling out of place.. if that makes sense 
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She definately was uncomfortable in my shoes
4inches and 2 sizes too small, but she did beautifully.
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cool photo. i like the contrast between the girls skin and everything else. it does seem a hint too dark but then again, color correction on a monitor can be hard and what i see could be different from what you see and would want the photo to look like. anyways, nice job.
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I have the tendancy, to just go by my screen on the exposure with my RAW files...
I might change it if I feel it's a problem
I'm glad you like it!
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it's a wonderful composition although i think it seems a bit underexposed and wld like to see a little more detail. but overall, i think the darkness suits it alright, lending a dreamy atmosphere that just looks really cool in bw. 
cheers,
sarah k
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I wasn't sure on the exposure because it was more exposed than that before, but I felt it gave too much away, and I wanted people to look at it more as it was, then to look closer if they were interested. Hard to explain, I didn't think it was too underexposed though...
thanks love, I really appreciate it!
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i know exactly what you mean and you definitely accomplished what you wanted with it!
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The model's pose looks a little bit forced... Especially her hands... Plus the composition looks a little empty on the right...
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Thanks for the critique!!
You have any suggestions as to a "perfect" pose?
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There is no such thing as a "perfect" pose... In this case I don't know exactly, maybe if she whould keep on of her hands near her neck or face, can't really explain it writting, but it's easy to look at some other portraits and see what looks good and what does not...
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I'm not used to portrait work, and I really want to improve
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Well not right now... I'm kinda tired and lazy...
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That's not me O_O
It's Lydia
but yeah
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lol ok, look like your icon thow ^^
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Haha my icon's not too clear I guess
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GEE Thanks! I think so too!
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Great shot and theres just something about it
I love it too
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